You Were the One Who Asked to Break Up. Why Are You Crying After I Faked My Death?

The writing is pretty good, but it was a bit rough in the early stages. The characters and plot are also pretty good, but the emotional lines between the heroines are not handled well.

The writing and plot are relatively smooth. Sometimes there is a little humor. The villain is not always proud and often fails. I like it.

This protagonist is not good, I feel like I don't have enough brains

The last few dozen chapters were really poorly written, and they were written randomly if they couldn't finish the plot. The villain easily threatened the money and got it with just ten or twenty million. The male and female protagonists were completely witless. From the beginning to the end, the male protagonist was also a person with low self-esteem and arrogance, rude, imbecile, and impersonal. In the end, he came back for revenge and said that his character had changed a lot. He really didn't change. He was the same from beginning to end. He had an extremely annoying personality.