You Said It Was a Little Flame, So Why Are You Lighting a Cigarette with a Heavenly Flame?

The system disappeared? Didn't it mean that you can draw the strange fire again at the first level? Where is the magic power of using a knife to kill monsters?

Supernatural novels plus supernatural fire. The overall presence of the system is a bit low. It seems that apart from giving 🔥, it doesn't give many tasks. In fact, you can give skills and other things, and they are not items that can only be given to Dou Po (unlike system articles, more like inheritance)? The speed of cultivation is not like that of systematic novels. You really need to practice by yourself, and you also need to learn the techniques by yourself. Lots of color but no real action. It is said to be a deep forest, but in fact it is difficult to write about what really happened during this time period.

Not bad

How can the word "huang" be so good?! Although I started writing about student life. But it's really cool.

It's a mess, there's something there, I just started writing it and then it's gone.

To be honest, the writing is not bad, but there is too much nonsense, which is a bit unbearable.

How should I put it? The male protagonist is strong, but the description of the woman is too poor. Just for the telepathy at the back, I think the male protagonist's response was a bit aggrieved. I don't know if this is a harem story, but if this was the case in other cool stories I read, I would have pinched her. Although it is said that cool writing does not require using your brain, it seems uncomfortable even if you don't use your brain.

You wrote about Fighting to Break the Sky and Fighting the Sect here. Will there be Fighting the Lord, Fighting the Saint, and Fighting the Emperor later on?

The plot was good and the author's writing was good, but it ended suddenly

It's pretty good. It's just written in huang huang. It's better if it's less, but it feels a little greasy if it's too much.