Inheriting a Bankrupt Amusement Park, I Relied on the System to Become the Richest Man

I really like this article, and I update it twice a day. The plot and characters are very good, and it's worth reading. ٩(๑•ㅂ•)۶

The subject matter is novel, but the logic is confusing. It is an amusement park, but it is closed on weekends. Flour is scarce in ancient times, but it sells egg-filled cakes, and its expressiveness in writing is average.

Very nice, I hope the author likes it more

The construction of an amusement park was quite good at the beginning, but later it became very annoying when it came to the relationship between husband and wife. The heroine didn't talk a lot, and the hero didn't know what was wrong! Then the heroine's father was coaxed around by his adopted daughter. He couldn't tell whether it was good or bad for the heroine. Anyway, he became more and more depressed the more he watched it. In the end, although I felt aggrieved after the divorce, the adopted daughter who was the culprit was still doing well, so I felt bad! 😠

The plot is quite novel, and the early description is very interesting, but the middle and later stages are not in line with my expectations. First of all, the same plot appears repeatedly, which really affects the viewing experience. In the later period, the author's personal subjective feelings were very strong. I don't know why, but it gave people a very sad feeling. I felt uncomfortable and wanted to give up the article several times. Considering that there were not many chapters, I finished reading it. The result may be that the data is not very good, it is a hurried ending, and even the introduction is not fully written. Many pitfalls are not filled in, and I was stabbed by a knife. 💔💔💔

In the early stage, it was very interesting and creative, but in the later stage, it suddenly became very bloody, with chaotic parent-child relationship, chaotic husband-wife relationship, and green tea sister. The ending is even more confusing. The author's writing practice

Didn't it say there was an article about the ocean? I read the entire article and didn't see it

Those mermaid planes and stuff written in the introduction are not completely unfinished at all. Moreover, the heroine has no ability to solve problems, and her memory is very, very bad, and she often writes repetitive words. As well as the relationship with his father, adopted sister, ex-husband, cicada, those things are written in a speechless and disgusting way. Anyway, this book is very ugly, so don't read it. I haven't read such a disgusting and speechless book in a long time.

The subject matter is fresh, but the writing is really not that good.

இдஇ Who didn't see the ocean