Return of Accepting a Disciple: I Can See the Entry of Disciple Attributes

In fact, this book is quite good. It doesn't have so much sleazy nonsense, which is a plus. However, the description of the second apprentice is quite failed. Her brother was accepted as a disciple by the Immortal Cultivation Sect, but he was unable to take the little girl away and was stopped by a little mortal (her uncle and aunt). This does not conform to the laws of the world in your book. This is a big loss! There is also the matter with the unsuccessful second apprentice, who is always scared away by coercion. Where is the protagonist's "Lao Liu aura"? With the aura of Laoliu, will it scare children? Therefore, the evaluation is "average". Sorry!

This pretentious plot is embarrassing

It's quite nice, novel and a bit funny, but updates are slow, so I still need to save up.

Brainless. And childish. Quite funny.

It was barely watchable at first, but after arriving at Baihua Valley, it became abnormal. It felt like someone had changed the writing, and it started to slow down the mind. The content looked disgusting, the protagonist was no longer invincible, and the system was incompetent. Later, there was a family of war immortals. Someone came and was awesome at first. Then I felt that the protagonist should be unbeatable. Just when the apprentice upgraded the protagonist, he began to break through the quasi-emperor on the spot. What's outrageous is that everyone knows what kind of natural disaster it is, but they don't know what realm it is. It's really numb. I feel that everyone in front of me is a bit dissatisfied with the protagonist. I think the protagonist is very powerful. However, the protagonist can't do anything in Baihua Valley. He has to rely on others to directly compete with others. It's too low. Later, there is a quest for hegemony. I really can't stand it. The protagonist just accepts disciples and waits for them to level up and become invincible. Why write about hegemony😓

It's hard to describe in one sentence, so outrageous that it explodes.

Well enough! !

Indiscriminate use of idioms, it is recommended to avoid this pitfall if you have an elementary school education or above

How to say it? The realm is written in a mess. The plot is so weird that I don't even know what it is about.

Water word count is serious