Get to Work, Your Majesty!

In fact, I feel that this is not the author's problem. This is Qimao's problem. I don't know why, but I feel like there are so many good books on Qimao that no one has read. Take a look at the top ten recommendations, especially the first one. The Dragon King article is written like a poem. In terms of writing and plot alone, this book surpasses many books. I feel like it's a matter of publicity.

Online Games: Black and White's Speed ​​Catches Up with the Gods

The writing is okay, but the starting point is too high, and it will easily collapse if you don't write well.

Ok I've finished reading it, I came here from Emperor Jiang Tian. "Simple" talk [Plot/Setting] Let's talk about the setting first. Due to the short space, the setting is not shown very well, so it feels relatively fast and sudden. As for the plot, many aspects are great, but it may be because the setting is difficult to consider every place well, so it actually seems a bit sudden and the pace is a bit too fast, but I don't deny that the overall direction is good. The relationship between the two is also quite sudden due to the length, so it is recommended that the length be really lengthened. (It may also be that the author is not good at writing emotional drama???) The setting and plot of magic and divine power may be lacking because of the short length (this is the third time). Of course it's impossible to be perfect, and I hope the author can write better and better. [Writing Style] In this case, due to the limited space, I feel that the author's writing style is not well demonstrated, but I do not deny that the author's writing style is good. [Characters] basically conform to the stereotype (not in a derogatory sense here) (probably because of the short length). There is not much to say, and it has the flavor of an author. [Summary] The author is great The shortcomings are the short length, the world view, many settings and character creation may not be very good, but I think no one is perfect and everything cannot be perfect. Things like the beginning and not the end often happen. I hope the author will get better and better. [Disclaimer] The above opinions only represent personal opinions, and are only the personal opinions of this book and the author of this book.

I feel like Black and White is really down and out.

Advantages: Excellent black and white writing Disadvantages: too short and not enough to read

Black and white first

Oh, this is so beautiful

Nice

Very nice