Tragic Death in Burning Immortal Platform, the Elder Sister and Her Husband Tortured and Killed the Entire Sect

Like it very much~

The lower world ascends to the upper world during the Mahayana period. The upper world is the highest and is also the peak of the Mahayana period. When the upper and lower worlds are combined, there is an additional peak. This does not feel like ascension. This is the law of heaven in different continents. The ascension from the lower world is to the fairy world, and the fairy world is raised to the divine world. Isn't this the case in all fantasy and fairy tales? In this book, the highest level of cultivation is waiting for death at the peak of Mahayana. The co-author has been lonely.

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I like it very much. I will update it soon.

The plot is rich and ups and downs, the characters are vivid, and the depictions and descriptions are also very delicate. The emotional line and the heroine's career line do not conflict, and the integration is just right.

Still praise it. The overall story is quite good, and it is a refreshing revenge story, but the writing is too rough and rough. There is no water in the whole text, the story is told concisely, but the writing style is average, there are so many mistakes and typos that are numbing, and the plot is quite enjoyable. After all, the heroine is great, and the male and female protagonists are also more in love than each other, but there is too little emotional writing. Except for the heroine, the writing of other characters is too flat and not profound. The whole text is too little about the emotions of the characters, and it is all about narration.

As a cool novel, it is too bland. Everything is taken care of by the male and female protagonists, without any challenge. The writing style is as straightforward as writing a diary. I feel that the whole book is useless. It is not interesting to read, but it is a pity to abandon it before seeing the ending. After reading the ending, I feel... I have finished reading...

It looks great, I highly recommend it to my friends.

The amnesiac author has a storage ring but still pretends to carry a frame to collect medicine. Why? Pretending to be cute? Little things don't make sense. Big things are all kinds of contradictions. Incoherent. Ugly.

It's written in a mess, with repeated words in every page. It's just that there aren't that many words and it's just trying to fill in the numbers.