Raided and Exiled on My Wedding Night, the Wicked Elder Sister-in-Law Feeds the Whole Clan Like Kings

The article is very good

The plot is okay, but the sentences are not fluent, there are often some inexplicable sentences, and there are many bad sentences, give up

1. The heroine has the heart of the Holy Mother. Sister-in-law Wei repeatedly hurts the heroine and puts her to death, but the heroine still handles her lightly. 2. The boy said how powerful he was, but Sister-in-law Wei started to blame the heroine with a few random words. What is even more speechless is that he accidentally saw the heroine healing her wounds, but he criticized the heroine for being unruly. 3. In the article, the heroine sometimes calls the old lady of the Wei family grandmother, and sometimes calls her mother. 4. When the heroine was framed, she did not handle the matter decisively in the early stage.

The heroine is very holy, she insists on getting in on others even if they don't appreciate it, and the Wei family's second sister-in-law is mean-mouthed, it makes people sad to see her, why don't you deal with the heroine if she is so capable?

Be careful when entering the trap! On the road of exile where the Holy Mother is everywhere, all kinds of strange and beautiful people appear as saints. It turns out that I don't deserve it, so I left a footprint and moved away, so I can find someone nicer to wash my eyes with.

It's very ink, the way to deal with the best is to let them keep looking for trouble. Usually I will see the back, but I can't stand it even before we leave the desert. Facing the government servants who are looking for trouble, how can I kill them directly when there are only two of them, and give in step by step? It's really enough

Has the author revised the article? Some parts are indeed more reasonable and smooth after the revision.

The ending is too perfunctory

The system and space are pretty good, but it looks so frustrating. The heroine helps others time and time again. Others have an ugly face, and their heroine is already the leader now. There is also a male protagonist who doesn't know anything but just hates the female protagonist and listens to other people's instigation. Generally do not abandon the text. But it's so uncomfortable to watch, so angry, and it's not good for your health. 😂

In the whole Wei family, except for my grandmother and Wei Yunrou, there are few people who are grateful. The heroine just accepted everything because she was studying medicine and had a kind heart. I was annoyed by it. Especially the second sister-in-law Wei is really annoying.