The Carefree Heir

I'm quite puzzled as to why it was given such a high score. From the beginning to the poetry meeting, there were only a few people who kept saying the same few sentences over and over again, talking about the Duke's Mansion and the mermaid's death net. Either this is someone else's fiancée or that is, why are these unmarried widows marrying you? You saved the universe in your previous life, and they all seem to be unmarried sisters-in-law. Before you traveled through time, you were a fool, and these women fell in love with you. For the sake of plot, even logic is ignored.

Generally speaking, the writing is okay. The author's logical thinking is online. There are some common shortcomings in time-travel novels, but not many. The biggest flaw of this article is that it is not true that the protagonist is a fool. His words and deeds do not have the shadow of a fool at all, and he does not hide his clumsiness enough.

Don't write at this level anymore. Find a factory to make screws.

The emperor killed his whole family. He was also preoccupied with business. I don't want revenge, I just want to protect myself

The more I write, the more confusing it becomes, with no distinction between priorities and logic, and even the name of the protagonist is changed.

The emotional description of the characters in the novel is almost zero! Regardless of any occasion, any plot, or situation, (said in a deep voice) (said in a deep voice) (said in a deep voice) 😓 It can appear three, four or even five or six times in one episode. Apart from this, there are no other words to express emotions. Currently, I have read 260 chapters, and the author has updated it to chapter 400. I hope that the author can add more words to express emotions in the future. We can look forward to the follow-up!

In 300, the protagonist changed his name frequently, from Qin Shaobai to Lu Shaofeng. It was clear that when 200 was approaching 300, the protagonist's grandfather brought wine to the palace once, and the Minister of War was also sent to Lingnan. In 3780, the Minister of War returned to his post without incident, and the protagonist once again served wine. The author has a bad memory and cannot understand the words.

Anticlimactic, hasty ending

It sucks, it stops without an ending.

The male protagonist is too weak. His father and uncles are all dead. He also knows that it was framed by the people above. He has been raising sheep, chickens and ducks in the Western Mountains without thinking of revenge, weaving and making furniture. He knows that he is doing it to make money and raise soldiers, but when can he take revenge? The thunder is loud and the raindrops are light. It's a tug-of-war and there is no hope.