After the Eldest Sister Showed Off, the Younger Siblings Were Dumbfounded

1. The relationship between the characters is a bit confusing. For example, there is a paragraph in the article about the relationship between the royal family, "The first emperor brother, the second emperor brother, and the third emperor brother accepted the throne." Where does the male protagonist rank? 2. There are so many typos that I don't want to mention them. When I post the article, shouldn't I read it again before posting it? 3. It's hard to comment on how the plot is partially very good, but overall feels like it's dragging. 4. Writing style, well, let's not talk about it, it's a common problem in most online articles nowadays.

It's hard to comment, I think it's average In the novel I read before, the dowry lists for rich people were made in three copies, one each for the mother's family, the husband's family, and the official family. Moreover, I felt that the author made everyone look so stupid and stupid that I couldn't read it.

Although she hasn't entered the military camp yet, the heroine is really cool, and the friends around her are also gathering around her little by little. The male protagonist is pretty good, but he needs to be more outstanding to match the heroine. There are also several supporting characters with distinctive personalities. I like Sister Liu and the Venomous Crown Prince very much at the moment, and I look forward to more chapters soon.

What the hell did you write? The heroine is so exhausted and off-putting.

It's good to watch at the moment, but updates are too slow. Then I always think why the protagonist is always good everywhere. He has a good master, a good mind, and good luck. Is there anyone who writes a negative protagonist?

It doesn't mean anything. I was reborn as a lonely person. I was bullied like that in my previous life, but I still can't be cruel in this life. I have been wronged for a long time. If I don't have the ability, let it go. If I have the ability, I will still be pointed at and scolded, and I will leave money to my enemies. She deserves to be bullied like that in the previous life.

There are too many typos! The heroine was reborn lonely, Grinding and chirping, Just being bullied!

There are so many typos in this article, and the names are only typed correctly a few times, I am speechless.

The text is okay, but the names are confusing and there are too many typos. Maybe the author deliberately wrote it this way to attract attention.

This typo makes me speechless. The heroine has the aura of being able to do everything and still do it well.