I Got Rich Overnight, I Hoarded Goods and Raised a Queen

There are too many flaws to mention. I just want to say that you can write cool stories, but at least you have to have some brains. I just wrote about the protagonist breaking the opponent's hand, and then I wrote about the protagonist's name as the person with the broken hand who stabbed someone with a knife? Can transfers worth tens of billions or hundreds of billions arrive in seconds? Finally👮🏻‍♂️the door was blocked. How did the protagonist get into the house through the blockade?

All the characters have only one characteristic, they are arrogant and childish, and each one is stupider than the other. I have read a few that have a score of 9 or above, and the short ones are the worst. They seem to be written by a person with no social experience.

Brain atrophy articles are not as good as novice articles. They must be written by a young man who has never experienced social beatings. The protagonist is brainless, and the supporting characters are also brainless. It is strange that the rating of 9.2 Is not a brush. If not, I am Qin Shihuang.

The writing style is still a bit too immature. Many places cannot withstand scrutiny and there is no foreshadowing. Although it is a short and refreshing article, you can still see that the author is deliberately writing some logic. If you have nothing to kill time, you can read it and give support to the good reviews. I am a bookworm for 2283 hours. I am not talking nonsense.

It doesn't matter if your writing is exaggerated, but please use your brain to connect the logic of what you write before and after. And you also have poor common sense, so Baidu is reluctant to search more.

I support Brother Xing's new book, Time Travel Between Ancient and Modern Times, this kind of subject matter is so interesting, 😎

It's okay in the front, but the plot behind it is terrible.

Pulpy

Generally speaking, it is okay to listen to a novel without brains. You can listen to it, and you will complain while listening with your brain. There are too many flaws, and basic common sense is not understood in many places. When writing, can't the author enrich his own knowledge before writing?

The subject matter is good, but the author lacks common sense!