They Forced Me to Marry Someone Else, and My Stepsister Went Mad Instead

This length is good, and it doesn't feel too bloated to read. However, the heroine is reborn, not time-traveled. The author got carried away while writing. Some modern dishes have appeared, the educational concepts are also very advanced, and the house design and other things are made as if he has traveled through time. As the saying goes, "One's country is easy to change, but one's character is hard to change." The heroine of the previous generation didn't live very long, and she didn't have a lot of experience. She just experienced tragic events, which stimulated her temperament to change drastically, or she had to live a new life. It's normal to foresee and control things, or to have more insights about life, but it should be kept within a certain degree, and not to make people feel like they are acting out at any time and at any time. In addition, the author's love writing style is average, lacking in detail and more than greasy. Although it is said that the ancients also had crazy and wild people when it came to sex, but should we pay attention to the personality? The male protagonist is not reborn, he is still a virgin. Although the female protagonist is reborn, she is still a young girl and she is not from a brothel. The three views of feudal society determine that the two serious people who have not officially worshiped should not speak so obscenely... There are a lot of typos, and one tael of silver = one ounce of money = 1,000 wen, not five hundred or six hundred. Furthermore, there are too many typos, which affects the reading experience. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

There are too many typos, and sometimes the names are wrong.

The plot is not rich in content, it is all ink words. The parents are cursing and yelling at each other, and there are no subtle words or big ideas. It must be at the elementary school level!

The fake identity later is really blind. Tian Ying, it's okay if your daughter doesn't look like you. The point is that she still looks like you. She was able to succeed in pretending in her previous life. It tests the IQ and eyesight of Mrs. Shen and the people. Many plots are illogical. You can't tell the difference between you and him. There are so many mistakes.

The names are confusing, there are too many characters or there are too few characters.

Both the male and female protagonists have good personalities, and the plot is not complicated, but some character lines are not explained.

Nice