Star Collapse? I'm Already in Ruins and Still Collapse?

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 51. This plot is particularly abrupt. When the protagonist is invited to stay for dinner, he refuses. It feels quite cliché. But when the car was driving, the protagonist didn't say anything. He got more and more angry and asked Qingmei to get out of the car. In the end, he ran back to eat and couldn't stand it anymore. Although there were reasons to round out the plot, I felt it was too blunt. At the beginning, he refused to lick the dog. If he saw Qingmei licking the dog, he could refuse if he saw it. However, the protagonist turned on the crazy licking mode when he saw the goddess, and felt that it was nothing interesting. The protagonist's behavior, which sounds good, is that he does whatever he wants, but what is bad, he just does whatever he wants. The protagonist is like this, and the author has to think about how to find a reason. Anyway, I don't see the protagonist. If you write it like this, you might as well write that this system is a bad system. As long as it is bad, it will be more interesting to give poems and songs.

So everything you sign in must be kept secret?

Originally I never review any book, but I can't figure it out when the plot of this kid's play house got a score of 9.9. I couldn't stand it after chapter 30.

The writing style is old-fashioned and nonsensical, and the character design is not very clear. What does the pig's foot want to do? The supporting characters are not very likable either, they are a bit witty, and they all look awkward. Also, it is generally impossible to support an article solely by making jokes. You still need to have content. You also need to research the song selection. If the song is too old, it is the youth of your author, and readers may not necessarily buy it.

I feel like the character design is a bit broken. It has been changed too much for the sake of the plot. I've read Chapter 51.

Just so-so! It is readable, but I feel that the author may not be too interested in this novel. The writing style is relatively good, but the plot is not rigorous enough, the characterization is problematic, and the protagonist's childhood sweetheart is inexplicable.

Pig's Foot's character is a bit neurotic. The supporting characters have lost their wits, and the whole movie is just funny and can barely be watched.

In the first twenty chapters, Pigfoot is a psychopath! I went to Lianzong to break up, and I was convinced! After reading Chapter 50, Pig's Knuckles are so humble that for an amateur, because he looks like a celebrity, he has to kowtow and acknowledge his godmother! Is your company going to go bankrupt? Need an amateur to save the day? Those popular songs for Pig's Knuckle are all in vain. These songs can be popular for anyone. As long as they are not too bad, they can become popular for anyone who praises them! Do you have to find an amateur? Then summarizing these dozens of chapters, the pig's trotters are like a serious illness. They feel happy and angry with just one sentence. I don't know what the brain circuit is, and I don't know why it is like this. The pig's trotters are like the mental illness of an aunt who has not been around for a few months after menopause!

It's really not me who's telling you, the author, that you've run out of writing. Everything you've written after chapter 50 is so unbearable that I can't stand it anymore.

Is the protagonist an expert? As mentioned earlier, when others lick dogs, they transform themselves when they see the goddess. Then Qingmei can be considered a friend. Why are you treating your friends so badly?