You Have Been Expelled from the Martial Arts School, How Can You Still Become the God of War?

Not bad, so exciting. The description of the character's personality is lifelike. Well worth a look. This

A new book is out. Feel free to express your opinions. This is the time to learn from experience. I am only here in the mountains, so I may not see the problems. I hope readers will give me some advice so that the blacksmith can make better progress and write better stories. Blacksmith thanks everyone here!

After so many chapters, the person who wronged the protagonist has not yet been killed, and Lao Sun is dead. He also said that he would not allow his children to join the Demon Suppressing Pass. How could he ruin his future? If civilians are so good, why does the protagonist want to be a warrior himself?

There are many typos, the plot is confusing, Lin and Ling can't be distinguished... And there are many problems

Plain and simple. My IQ doesn't seem to be very online. Since the time traveler is an adult. This kind of IQ really is. Still not moving, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah

Not to mention that this is the worst book I have ever read, at least it is the most perfunctory and the author has no fault at all. He avoids pitfalls and avoids pitfalls.

I have read thirty-eight episodes so far. The plot is average and feels a bit copied. Moreover, the author of the previous Qi and Blood value confused the values. Personally, I feel that the plot is a bit slow and the word count is too low.

There are a lot of typos, so I suggest you review it before publishing.

I thought I would insist on not joining the official force, but then I turned around and joined. It's really disgusting.

The data is a mess (I can't stand it), the plot isn't great, and there was a section that looked very similar to God of Destruction, which made me a little embarrassed.