You Said I Had a Will of Steel. Did You Really Mean It?

This book is very good, and its ideological imprint is very solid. Although I did not read it all, I skipped through it, but for me, the first dozens of chapters were quite unclear. The author's knowledge in mathematics and technology has greatly expanded my knowledge as an ordinary person. Let me briefly talk about the shortcomings. The writing style of this book is not suitable for writing novels. I personally think that such writing style would be more appropriate for writing interesting popular science books. As for the novel, there are many parts that are too hard-core. In addition to the author's boxing heart, which gave me some patriotic resonance, the knowledge analysis in many fields of science and mathematics is too profound. For novels, the key is to be easy to understand and firmly capture the reader's heart. The key point is to share joy, anger, sorrow and joy. Yes, there are indeed descriptions of some major historical events that can cause joy, anger, sorrow and joy, but there are too few and the emotions are poorly controlled. You expect the emotional ups and downs in one chapter to last for 5 or 10 chapters, which is too ideal. A truly good article can make readers smile playfully at one moment and burst into tears at the next. The previous chapter is full of hatred and bitterness, and the next chapter is warm and romantic. It is not obtrusive. Good transitions and accurate emotional control of readers are the key points of writing a good novel. It can only be said that the author has received a very high level of education, but his writing style is still relatively immature. It is recommended to start with short and medium-length novels, settle down the writing style, grasp the reader's psychology, and strive to fully understand the reader's psychology of "why I read this book, why I can read it, why I can't stop, why it resonates with me and why I am willing to take the time." - From a little bookworm in the crowd.

I don't understand why this kind of science and technology literature all follow the same mold, with an uninformed mother who likes to point fingers and speak without restraint, a green tea wife, and a princess-sick sister. Is it necessary to occupy space with these 38?

Overall, it's okay and can be called an excellent work. 55 Points, a moderately good work. There are almost no grammatical errors and few typos, which is a plus. It's okay to arrange it more casually, and there's nothing wrong with the logic. The key is that some parts were too boring and made me jump a lot. And I'm not very satisfied with the ending. It's obviously too hasty, and after reading it, I don't feel empty at all... This is because the author is not skilled enough and does not allow people to fully immerse themselves in it. There are very few poisonous points, and they are all minor poisons, so I won't mention them here and respect the author. But there is one thing, that is, there is some "comprehensive detoxification", that is, the protagonist's arrangement is too "ordinary" and does not look like a protagonist-here I mean strong. Of course, it doesn't necessarily mean that it's show-off, but the high-profile expression of personality and psychology is not good enough to satisfy the fantasies of human beings who defy the will of nature, so it's just not reasonably satisfying. This article can be evaluated as an excellent and key point of view. One is the readers' sense of expectation for the protagonist and the expectation of the protagonist from the whole country. The other is that when the protagonist breaks through each difficulty, when many bosses are shocked and when the whole network shouts that it is awesome, the plot arrangements are actually good. However, some places are a bit too draggy and prone to aesthetic fatigue. (Another point is that the female protagonist is actually very difficult to write in this kind of novel, because once the writing is rubbish, it will be a failure, and good writing is of no use, because the key is the protagonist who is the god of learning, so the heroine cannot add more color, she can only satisfy the author's own imagination and complete the single self-pleasure , so I personally don't recommend it to authors with less skill who want to achieve better results. Of course, if it is a master-level one and the writing is particularly good, that is an exception. But to be honest, I have not seen a particularly suitable heroine in this type of novel. None of them are outstanding. They are all a drag.) Actually, it is best to arrange some exciting and sad plots in this kind of article. The so-called abuse refers to the abuse of the protagonist's relatives and friends, communities of interests, countries, organizations, etc., And this kind of pleasure is the reader's pleasure caused by the protagonist overcoming danger, safe and sound, and even making a major breakthrough. That is to say, the contrast is highlighted, suppressing first and then rising, which crucially highlights the importance of the protagonist and also shows the protagonist's awesomeness and power. Of course, this kind of plot must have logic, otherwise it will be uncomfortable and pure abuse. Well, that's it for now, you can read it, and you can see that the author wrote it carefully, and some of the knowledge in it is not wrong.

If I had a special power that could turn fiction into reality, I would choose it

Not that interesting plot-wise

You can see it from the front, but you keep preaching from the back

Fur seal

Anyone who has taken the college entrance examination will have a deep impression. The three years of high school are really the three years that determine your life. You must have an iron will to study wholeheartedly. First love, Internet cafes, game consoles, martial arts novels and other external factors will seduce you.

In addition to the vigorous scenes of war and destruction of the country, everything else is there!

It's verbose, there are a lot of confusing sentences, and the peripheral descriptions are also very immature. Please, you are writing a novel.