Go Home and Farm with Space

The sentences cannot be read smoothly and the writing is messy. The male protagonist is either injured or recuperating every day. The emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists look stiff and awkward, the toothache looks depressing, and they dance and give up until the ending.

It's still pretty good-looking, but there are a lot of typos.

Time becomes hours, from the first hour to the end

The male protagonist is either injured or recuperating, and the female protagonist is not neat and tidy at all.

I haven't finished reading it yet, less than half. There is space for farming, for bringing in people, etc. It's too ordinary.

There are many typos, the sentences are not fluent, and the logic of the article is a bit confusing.

There are a lot of typos and it's a bit confusing.

Not very pretty