Poisonous Concubine, She Came from Hell

I have a suggestion for the author, move the plot faster and don't be too slow. The part where the male protagonist and the female protagonist save the girl in the village is too slow. There is really no need to write so many long dialogues. There is no need for the female protagonist to talk so much nonsense to her scumbag brothers, scumbag sisters and scumbag men. The heroine's maid is also really long-winded. Hurry up and get the heroine to the male protagonist and give her a name.

The heroine came from hell, she didn't read the feeling at all, it's a lot of nonsense

The female protagonist is strong and smart, but the female partner poisoned her to make the original owner fat. She started to lose weight as soon as she came, and then turned around and poisoned the female protagonist. The prince is just a little too stupid, I hope you won't forgive him in the future. The male protagonist is pretty good so far. Although he has been exposed to a lot, he is also a gentleman. He is not inappropriate for children from the beginning like other books. Overall very good. Wait for updates.

Even if the male protagonist is weak, the male protagonist's bodyguards are even more inferior. The whole story is like a few elementary school students arguing and arguing. The title of the book is completely inconsistent with the heroine's character.

It's all nonsense, it's all top quality. In summary, the heroine, the Holy Mother, is not very capable and the Holy Mother is always meddling in her own business.

I accepted WC. I came from QQ short video. I felt like I was stuffed with shit. I was disgusted to death. After reading twelve chapters, I was disgusted. In the face of a doctor who can take his own life, he allowed his guards to keep insulting and slandering others. When the guards had enough scolding, he gave an order. After that, the heroine didn't feel there was a problem at all. It could almost be said that she was not dissatisfied at all. I just let the guards scold me, haha, I laughed out loud. I usually don't like to write comments, but this really disgusted me. I had already deleted Qimao, but I thought it was so disgusting that I came back to complain. I seriously suspect that the author loves men, don't complain. Anyway, I deleted Qimao after posting it, and I can't see it, hehe.

In fact, it can be seen that what the main writer wants to create is a strong female core, which is to save trafficked women. The intention is really unconventional. At the same time, there will also be the awkwardness of ordinary women towards the people they cherish. Human nature has been three-dimensional for many years. This is the person who stands out on the page. After all, the heroine The male protagonists are all human beings, and without God's perspective, they cannot see each other's struggles. I can understand that there will be misunderstandings, but the conflicting descriptions between the male protagonists always give me the feeling that the female protagonist wants the male protagonist to trust her in all aspects, but she does not have the patience to trust the male protagonist. Just a little When there was a slight commotion, she thought, well, that's it, I knew it would be like this. In fact, this is contrary to the core of the heroine. It is either the relationship after the sexual transformation or the heroine. Writing this way will make people feel uncomfortable. It can also be seen that the main writer wants to write about the heroine's natural desire for freedom. Originally married as a wife, it may be that she was moved by the male protagonist, but she always backed down. It was because when Miss Sun entered, the female protagonist felt that she had never thought of communicating clearly. Even if the male protagonist expressed her stance, she did not trust her and forgot what she said to communicate. If the heroine's father and mother died, the hero would be like, well, I don't want to be here anymore, you can be with so-and-so, and this jealous and coaxing stage must have been repeated more than three times. Still no use at all. But the heroine did clearly see the core of the problem and planned to escape in time. However, I felt that it was impossible for the hero to really marry his grandson, but the heroine still didn't believe it at all. It was really because the breast glands were a little blocked. Rolls, please don't abuse my breasts. The heroine is Mei Sa, but a person with a tender heart and a sense of justice is not limited to love. This is not how she is portrayed. She can trust the girl she relies on, but she can't believe that a person who is willing to sacrifice his life to collect medicine for her will give him a reasonable explanation. I am really sad about this. I hope you can read the words I typed carefully. I cry.

The plot is compact, the characters are distinct, the foreshadowing is well laid out, and it's beautiful to watch.

Just because I watched the beginning of Douyin, what happened next? If the heroine doesn't write a saint, can't I continue to write it🥹

It's so ugly. I'm going to be disgusted to death 🤮 I didn't even want to bind it, just to tell everyone that it's really ugly and a waste of time.