Junior Sister Changes Her Way to Wuqing Dao, and the Whole School Kneels Down to Persuade Her to Stay.

The writing of the whole article is not very good. The characters in the plot are not full enough, the plot is not coherent enough, and I don't understand what it is talking about. Both the dialogue and the actions of the characters are described stiffly. It looks like it was written by AI.

Fortunately, there are some parts that are repetitive, the plot is a bit confusing, and I can't understand it. The writing is not that good, so I can just do it.

In a world of cultivating immortals, you can identify your daughter just by looking at a jade pendant. Isn't it blood? Couldn't you tell that your daughter has your own blood as soon as you meet her? This is simply unreasonable. You are so advanced in cultivation that you cannot see that your own blood is flowing on your daughter. You just recognize your daughter with a jade pendant.

There are so many typos that it affects reading.

The article is not coherent enough and contains repetitive parts. , Well, it's hard to describe in one word anyway.

I feel like the content is good and I hope the author will update it soon ^_^

Don't make too many typos, it will make things look awkward

When I looked at it, I saw that the content was repeated. I had to read it again. It was really confusing.

There are so many typos, which lower the quality of the novel.

The ending is a mess, too abrupt, and there are a lot of typos. A powerful enemy appears. There is no description of the fight, but he is finally defeated and goes into hiding.