After Rebirth, I Married the Infatuated Prince

The space is not used well. Although it does not abuse the reader's heart, the counterattack is weak, and even after being slandered, there is no reply! The content is not connected, and it feels like there is a disconnect in the middle, causing the plot to be confusing and losing points😔💔

The eldest brother is simply a love fool! A general would not turn his grief into strength, but would risk his life for a woman! The character is written so masculine when he first appears, but it becomes difficult to describe later on. Can you forget everything once you become a monk? Don't you have to live a life as a monk? It's just an escape from reality!

It's okay, I feel like I'm keeping a running account. There are too many descriptions of scenery, but the writing style is not very good.

Nothing new, too cliche

There is a bit too much chatter, too much scenery, etc.

The eldest brother's marriage was not written well. His leg was obviously cured, so why not give it a happy ending?