Reborn in the 1970S After Being Traded in Marriage, the Cold-Faced Commander Won’t Stop Spoiling Me

The writing style of an elementary school student felt too childish after reading more than ten chapters. I read 50 chapters with a responsible attitude. I really couldn't bear the writing style. It's hard to finish in one sentence. I'll just tell you what I've seen so far: 1. A commander of a combat unit, who clearly likes the heroine in his heart, saw that the heroine risked his own life to save the lives of a car, but he casually listened to someone else's remarks about the heroine's disgust. The poor love the rich and climb high, so they decided that the heroine's character was corrupt and refused to meet; 2. The heroine said at the hotel that she saved the hero's life, but I didn't see it. The hero immediately realized something was wrong and chased the gangsters. The heroine did stop in front of the remaining two gangsters, but she was so scared that her legs slipped to the ground and she was held hostage by the gangsters. This is written in this place. If there is no heroine, I feel It makes it easier for the male protagonist to catch the gangster; 3. The female protagonist did nothing to the female Bai Lian. No matter when someone stabbed her with scissors or was about to beat her in the hospital, she did not say anything or explain. After all, they were married, and she did not remind the male protagonist's family to keep a distance from the male protagonist's caring female partner. She allowed the female protagonist Bai Lian to run rampant in the male protagonist's house and instigated children to do evil; 4. The female protagonist was raped upstairs by her step-sister in her previous life. She was dragged down to death. She didn't hold any grudges in this life. When the male protagonist misunderstood her, he didn't explain the reason for the change of marriage because of the betrayal of the scumbag and his step-sister. The male protagonist was left with knots in his heart. In the end, in Chapter 50, the male protagonist accidentally overheard the conversation between his stepsister and step-mother. He probably guessed that she really meant it. Moreover, she immediately and actively rescued her stepsister after she fainted. There were so many flaws that she couldn't explain, and she was very angry!

What does this say? The sentences are unclear, typos are everywhere, and common sense is wrong. There are many things that did not exist in the 1970s and only gradually appeared after the 1980s and 1990s, such as taxis, flower shops, cheongsams, gold rings, diamond rings... Obviously, the author is still too young.

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Overall it's okay! There are not many gorgeous words, and there is no ups and downs in the plot. The ending is a bit hasty. You can also read them when you are bored.

The golden finger is really easy to use. The heroine is absolutely omnipotent. This background is not from the 1970s. It's the 90s. In addition, the image of Jasmine is really hard to describe. Being straightforward does not mean that she has no quality. She has no support. I can't stand it anymore. I've withdrawn it.

The ending is so hasty

Is this written about the 1970s? From the way I speak to my life and environment, I feel that it is at least after the 1990s. Although I admit that the writing is good, when I combine it with the era, it feels a bit ridiculous.