My Wife Bai Gujing

I have one thing to say, everything about this novel is good, except for the main character, who is coy and has no charm at all. To be honest, even if you write that he suddenly becomes a turtle man, it will not affect the current character design at all. Summary: It's mediocre and featureless, and it doesn't even have a character!

The writing is a bit confusing and inconsistent. The water ghost has been included in the picture, but he later said that he has never seen it once. There is no specific division of power in this book, and the power is vague and specious. It is either a studio or an AI.

After reading the book for a long time, I felt very uncomfortable with the male protagonist in the book. After reincarnation, the woman from the previous life no longer recognized him. He was a scumbag. The woman from the previous life did not recognize him anymore. He still played with the daughter of the previous life every day. He was submissive and incessant. I couldn't understand his reincarnation. What happened? He acknowledged the promises he made to others in his previous life. He told his wife that they would meet each other when he came back, but in the end he refused to recognize her. He also said that he was his wife in his previous life. It doesn't matter in this life. It looks disgusting. If you don't want to recognize her, just break it off. Don't have such a deep relationship with someone's daughter.

Well enough

The writing was okay, but the plot wasn't developed enough.

I envy the protagonist. The Sword Immortal has countless close friends in his life, and he is blessed to be surrounded by sisters in this world.

After reading about 20 chapters, I personally feel that if the length is divided into 10 parts, 5 parts will describe the family's shortcomings, 3 parts will tell short stories, and 2 parts will advance the plot.