A Roll Call of Kings and Heroes, Driving the Ancients Wild

Topic: I have to say that the inventory system is very stable as a niche author. Every detail is enough to show that his experience and extensive experience make the article so natural that there are basically no big loopholes. In addition, the author also said that the world view is in a semi-overhead mode. A lot of space is reserved for filling in imagination, current affairs, witty comments, etc., Which makes the review article written by the author more benevolent and can be regarded as a small innovation🤓And at the same time, the author's current way of narrating historical figures from the perspective of historical figures is also unique in terms of perspective and is a very interesting setting. Characters: As a historical inventory article, the selection and description of characters is a big challenge✊🏻The author obviously has a certain idea. He neither talks in general terms to collapse every historical figure who has a certain image in people's hearts, nor does he follow the old tradition and let historical figures only remain in books and articles. The author presents every historical figure he loves and admires to the readers in humorous language, as if opening a new window for reading history. 👀But the only flaw is that although the author has a profound ability to portray characters, he does not grasp the emphasis properly. The descriptions of various characters are very detailed, but the description of the protagonist is erratic, superficial, and even The description of the supporting role of a historical figure currently appearing is more detailed than that of the protagonist and the heroine who has not arrived after dozens of chapters. Perhaps the article written by the author is more suitable for a group portrait article rather than a protagonist article. I hope the author can explain this point✍🏻️ Writing style: After looking through it, it seems that this is the author's first article, but the writing style does not appear immature, but has a kind of skillful and capable 🤔 There is no overly complicated narrative, and there is no unnecessary foreshadowing. Where it should be done in one go, it will never be sloppy, and where emotions should be brewed, every word must be carefully considered and put aside. When these articles return to the novices such as system articles, the author quotes scriptures bit by bit, uses poetry to rhyme, and uses words to capture the spirit. It is a rare and thoughtful article. The writing style is naturally close to the ancient rhyme of fairy tales and fantasy articles, but at the same time, it does not lose the sense of history. I really admire the author's state of mind🥰 Plot: Speaking of plot, I may have to make some suggestions for the author. Although it is a systematic review article, it is fundamentally a novel, and the plot is a part that cannot be ignored! 😡After reading a few chapters, I feel that the author lacks a systematic plot arrangement from beginning to end, but writes whatever comes to mind. For example, Zhuge Wuhou's machine guns and cannons. Although this idea is eye-catching, it seems to be a flash in the pan and never heard from again. I think if we can expand the imagination here and replay historical events, it will be a good plot. At the same time, the main plot has not been updated yet. It's very clear. The origin, reason, and purpose of the inventory system have not been explained until now. Maybe these can be dismissed for the purpose of refreshing the article, but if you hope that the author will improve the loopholes, I hope the author can adopt it, so as to make up for the plot and truly write a good article😁😁😁

Come on, author, work hard to update. It's rare to see such a beautiful piece of historical imagination in Qimao. Please vote. Please update the author quickly and take stock of the Yongle Emperor of the Ming Dynasty 😜😜

I voted. It was recommended by a friend. I didn't expect it to be really well written. Please update it! ! !

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It's really good-looking and I like it very much.

Nice! Really pretty! I have never seen such a good-looking book in my life. Yes, it is really good-looking.

2024.10.10.14:12. It's a long way to go, see you tomorrow.

The plot is also relatively novel, and it seems to be quite enjoyable for those interested in history. It would be better if the transition could be handled a little more.

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