The Invincible Champion

The plot design is okay, and you can watch it without using your brain, but there are too many logical loopholes. I just read about 30 chapters and talked about the bugs I found: 1. Orphans and widowed mothers were suppressed. I originally thought it was the emperor's instigation, or that the emperor was being ignored, but it didn't look like it. 2. The ministers all know that there is a big shot suppressing the protagonist's family. But the protagonist and the emperor just don't know 3. The fiancée asked the emperor for permission to break off the engagement, but the emperor said he didn't know. 4. There are 500 veterans who survived, but the protagonist doesn't know that the consolation money was paid by the protagonist's family. In addition, maintaining a private army would not be allowed in any dynasty. At least you must wear a vest. 5. The reason why the old general's army was wiped out was not investigated. It would make sense if the emperor was stupid or wanted them to die in the first place, but it's not like that in the book. 6. The songs sung by the courtesans are all from the Book of Songs, which means that they have not yet formed the poems and lyrics of later generations. The aesthetics of an era have the limitations of that era. Ci existed in the Tang Dynasty, but people in the Tang Dynasty believed that Ci was not elegant, and it was not until the Song Dynasty that it truly flourished. Since the author wants to design the plot of Wen Chao Gong, he should not position the literary world at that time as too primitive. Believe it or not, Jay Chou could only go begging for food when he arrived in the Qing Dynasty.

It's a bit fake. It's a bit too fake to travel back and become the protagonist.

If you can write like this, I guess in reality you are also a spineless waste.

This makes people speechless at the beginning. While the empress agreed to the bride snatching, she also said that it was wrong for the girl to break off the engagement. Even the little Karami below knew that someone was dealing with the footjob family. As a result, the empress did not know anything after a long time of investigation. There were contradictions everywhere. What the hell.

It's very interesting, I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Okay, it has the flavor of "Datang: Xiaoyao Prince Consort"

The prince rebelled, but he didn't kill him because he was afraid of being accused of being unkind and unjust? What kind of brain circuit is this?

It's too fake. Five hundred against five thousand without a single death is still a cold weapon.

The days are passing so fast. The wind is blowing, the leaves are falling, the snow is falling, and the fireworks are coming. This year has passed again. If I don't update, it will be the New Year.

Stallion has written a lot of women and filled the whole house with hundreds of women, but the protagonist can't find a single man around him.