Ming Dynasty: My Father Lan Yu Rebelled Against Hongwu

The beginning is great. It's very innovative. The protagonist is a time travel and rebirth setting. His character is heavy on killing, adventurous, and gambling. The character is complete, so it's okay. The problem lies in the plot. One is the emotional line. It is obvious that the author is not very good at writing. The emotional promotion relies heavily on creating accidents, and the accidents are repetitive, which is not the type that readers like. Throughout the entire article, it feels like a thorn in the reader's heart, making it a very bad read. The author seems to want to leave a weakness for the protagonist, and use this weakness to awaken the protagonist's strong emotions when necessary, thereby advancing the plot. But it seems to me that something is bad. Secondly, the content does not match the title. Although it is said to be "Season 1" at the end, there is no hint of "rebellion" at all. Is there any essential difference between what the protagonist does and those protagonists in Shuang's novels who are promoted in the process, have conflicts with powerful people, and finally stage a coup or raise an army to ascend the throne? No. But the protagonist just wants to climb to the top from the beginning. But you didn't finish this article, which greatly reduced the experience. The framework of the article is incomplete. How can you get people to give it a good review?

The protagonist's performance and process of rescuing Lan Yu at the beginning were very exciting, but from then on, the performance became more and more childish, and the plot became more and more bloody. The enemies that could be killed in advance had to be spared and left to disgust themselves repeatedly! He also had to "kneel down and lick" his wife in his "previous life", was too superstitious about his superior martial arts, and repeatedly allowed his enemies to assassinate him. What is the difference between this kind of behavior and those "reckless" heroes in the martial arts?

What's the outcome? Zhu Yuanzhang has not yet died, the rebellion has not yet started, the positions have not been established, the earth has not been conquered, so it ends hastily, what the hell is going on? Too rubbish

It's a historical article. I haven't even written a few chapters and I'm already licking the main plot.

We came to see the rebels, but they ended up being treated like dogs.

The author does not understand a basic common sense: it is not a parallel universe, and the same universe cannot have different histories. So after reading the first few chapters, there is no need to continue reading.

It's an above-average work, with a lot of flaws, but the plot is still exciting.

No, what kind of weird thing is Lan Yu's family? The protagonist saved the whole family. Lan Yu's adopted son and daughter still feel that the protagonist owes them. If you write it like this, you deserve to be killed by Lao Zhu Quan.

Eunuch

It's relatively poor. The author knows some history but doesn't know much about the world.