I Was Expelled from the Sect but I Am Invincible

This is Yao Xing's second work, and it can be seen that the writing style is much better than the first one! It seems that I have been practicing my writing seriously during this period. Here are a few suggestions: 1. The order of realms is difficult to remember, and there is still some confusion in terms of intensity. 2. Typos and missing words need to be improved. 3. The protagonist of this book can meet the protagonist of "The Demonic Sword Emperor" (hhh) 4. Write well! Just don't let it end badly. These are my current thoughts! I wish Yaoxing gets better and better and becomes a great writer soon

How can I put it, the truth is revealed in Chapter 40, I can only say that it is very refreshing, and it is just a dream, so it is not so disgusting. Unlike other novels, I really laughed out loud. There is nothing else but writing about those masters and junior sisters, right? Only those with masochistic tendencies should read these. This book is okay. This is the first time I have seen something like this.

Dog licking article! They all left on their own, but they were saved in the end! This is silly

Licking a dog and adding a saintly watch, whoever likes to watch it?

I'll give you 10 tickets because I have a lot

I stopped reading when I reached Chapter 40, but the author wrote it very carefully. Come on.

The water is a mess

Three hundred years of experience plus ten years of future dreams and aspirations are still the Holy Virgin

Rub my IQ

Except for pig's feet, everyone else's IQ is worrying, and of course pig's feet are not much better. If you like cool writing, don't read it. If you like boring writing, you'll definitely enjoy reading it.