Her Brother-In-Law Is Unattainable and He Loves Her to the Core at Night

I hope that people who want to read this article in the future will see my comment and choose carefully. 1 I think what I wrote before is still readable, and the identities and roles of the two people are quite distinctive. However, the two chapters newly updated by the author at the end look very bad, and it feels like the author has been changed. It feels like a leap from a female channel to a male channel. The whole idea and story line that the author wanted to write seemed very vague to me. 2. There are too few emotional lines between the male and female protagonists. I think the story is stronger. The two of them have always had misunderstandings, and they have never been able to explain it clearly. The male protagonist always wants to explain it later, and will never solve the matter now. And although the second female lead liked the male lead before, he chose to give up after seeing the relationship between the male lead and the female lead. In these two inexplicable situations, he started to compete with the female lead for the male lead again, which is very strange. 3 Qi Ran is a very mysterious character, and the second brother is also a very mysterious character. But for some reason, he started to fall in love with the heroine from these two pictures. I didn't feel that he liked the heroine from the conversation between the two before. 4 Going back in time, the heroine's family seems to have some kind of connection with Qi Ran. The eldest brother is written as particularly stupid. The father seems to be normal but it is not reflected. The second brother is completely uninvolved. He has always been a hidden person from the beginning to the end. 5. The male protagonist is too trashy. The male protagonist seems to have great strength, but seems to be unable to do anything. Even if I want to bring my mother to the ancestral hall, I can't do it. This novel is the only one I have seen where the useless male protagonist needs to get engaged to the second female protagonist to achieve his goal step by step. The writing of 6 female protagonists also feels like all the characters are particularly vague now. The story line is also becoming increasingly unclear. I can't see what I want to write at all, and it feels less and less like a romance novel. If I write a little more, I feel like I'm going to solve a crime. 7 The author stopped updating in the middle of the update for almost half a month. I don't know what new ideas he came up with during these more than half a month, but they have completely derailed what I wanted to see and gave up. I hope that people who want to read this article in the future will see my comment and choose carefully.

Forget it if there are too many typos. I can't tell which character is which. Isn't the person Gu Sisi likes Fu Xingzhou? Why did he compete with Lin Xingran for Boyunzheng again later? ? ? And when the hero and heroine got married, it felt like it was all done in one stroke😑😑😑 I don't want to complain anymore

I also got a great meal, thank you very much

It was okay to read at the beginning, but it was really unbearable later on. It was a mess. The plot jumped so much. Did someone change the writing? In the end, I couldn't even figure out the characters. It was so messed up that I abandoned the article. . . .

Oh Maiga, this character really impressed me, I like it so much! !

I really like this kind of heroine. She keeps improving herself in the face of difficulties and relies on herself to bloom brilliant flowers in difficult situations.

I feel like it's not written by the same author. It looks good at the beginning, but it's very sloppy at the end and doesn't match up with the previous articles. Also, the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are not well written.

You can read a little bit at the beginning, but it's really hard to explain later, so I don't recommend wasting your time. Because I feel unwilling not to watch the second half, and regret after watching it, so it's better not to watch it.

Tsk tsk, Fu Yunzheng is approaching step by step, and Lin Xingran is retreating step by step. He is running away from her.

Lin Xingran's growth line made my blood boil and I was hooked.