One Piece: Great Dark Sky

At least the first forty chapters of this book cannot be called a novel, but an outline like a running account. There was no elaboration, I just picked up the ups and downs of emotions and wrote some random parts. If you want to write about the time of the main plot, then start directly from the main plot. The first chapter can be written about being imprisoned in Impel Down City. Give a little bit of the reason. Then in subsequent experiences, use flashbacks to narrate, adding the outlines of your previous chronicles into it, instead of writing some chronicles along the timeline. This kind of outline writing will only make readers feel that the plot is loose and jumpy, and the logic of the characters' actions is confusing. Many plots are skipped inexplicably, and more than ten years later. For more than ten years, nothing has changed. In the more than ten years between the two lines, even the experience and way of thinking are exactly the same, and even the size of the store has not changed. All I can say is grit your teeth and read it as an outline. If the author can see it, I hope that when the next book does not know how to transition, I will leave it to AI, and then lay out three or four chapters based on the suggestions given by AI.

The protagonist is a fool

Generally

I didn't see much. The blind ghost swordsman DNFed at the start. The time was a few years before the Brooke crew was still around. I quite like this original detail. Overall the writing is quite smooth. Even the protagonist's knowledge and appearance after so many years of practice are too bad, incomparable to Yixiao. Since he didn't use Ba Dao (Bawang color) in the fight with Whitebeard? Neither does Warring States, and Roger seems to be useless. The details of the use of Haki are a bit lacking, but the story is pretty good.

You are so mean-spirited, do you want me to laugh to death so that I can inherit the inheritance?