Time Travel to Get Rich: the Farmer's Wife from the First Assistant's Family

There are many typos, and some logic and common sense writing are also problematic. It is not very exciting, but the overall structure is okay. It is a good read during the book shortage.

The story is quite complete, and the themes expressed are quite good, but I don't like some of the content in the story very much. I feel that some important things should be written more emphasis on, such as planting sweet potatoes, developing sweet potatoes, growing corn, developing corn, discovering oil and its uses. These should be written with emphasis. However, some of the dialogues in the article are too detailed and quite useless. Furthermore, there are quite a lot of self-narratives by the author. It feels like the word count is too long, and it seems very wordy, and some chapters feel a bit redundant. In addition, there are many typos in the article. For example, Fang Qi should call Baile and uncle, but ended up calling her brother all the time. An An and Lele should call Fang Qi cousin. In addition, these men of Fang Zeqian suddenly appeared. In such a short period of time, with so many people and industries, it feels like the explanation is not very clear. In short, the article contains a lot of content, and the logic is not very clear, so the article is not immersive enough to read. I hope the author can be more rigorous in the future and write more and better works.

Speechless

It's a bit difficult to get into the sense of immersion. The heroine's character is sometimes strong, sometimes weak and can be bullied, sometimes she can speak sharply against bad guys, and sometimes she can't. I'm a bit confused about what the author wants to express about the heroine's character.

So-so