Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from Becoming an Alchemist

The setting of this book is a bit different from other general settings, and it is not a cool book in the traditional sense. It is a slow-burning type, and there is no such thing as a forced slap in the face just to show off. Wisdom. Therefore, if you like to watch this type of movie and can watch it, you will like it more. Those who like Da Shuang's novels and don't have the patience to look at these settings will not be able to stand it. Overall, this book has some minor flaws. The main author may be a novice, so there will be more problems at the beginning, but it will become more and more exciting later on. The author's concept is relatively novel, and the plot does not fall into a routine, and there is still a bit of reality reflected in it.

The realm is too confusing. I always want to write about my own realm. To create my own path, I need a book with very good writing. If the writing and story are not good, who will read your book?

The system is confusing. The author wanted to innovate but made it more complicated. There are some minor points, such as the main character's wife being blown away by the wind for no apparent reason.

After only reading about ten chapters, I felt like I was reading a diary. They were all daily trivial matters. The pace was slow and the writing was procrastinating. It made me feel drowsy. It is really a good medicine for sleeping👍

It's just a running account, with plots and details in a mess! ! !

It was okay at first, but then it was too dull. The narration is repeated over and over again, a small matter wastes a lot of ink, and the pig's foot time traveler Golden Finger is inexplicable.

His mother was blown away by the wind! ! !

One, there is no heroine The second realm is a bit confusing

To be honest, this is the third novel that I can fall asleep while reading.

When one person attains enlightenment, chickens and dogs ascend to heaven The story is novel, with the background of revitalizing the family. It starts from small things, no matter how big or small, and has constant adventures. When encountering wind and rain, it turns into a dragon.