Doomsday of Natural Disaster: I Take My Paradise with Me Everywhere

Nice writing, don't write it next time

I listened to Chapter 25. It was amazing at the beginning, but then my parents' short story collapsed. The more I listened, the more sleepy I felt💤💤💤

How should I put it, I've watched the last of the apocalyptic movies. It's like he doesn't stock up on goods, and his work is extremely bad. I don't feel happy at all, and I also like to collect worn-out shoes. 😅

It's so disgusting that you want to vomit, don't watch it

The writing is okay, don't write it next time😂😂

It's so well written, please don't write it again next time. It doesn't have any courage. The protagonist's mother is also confused, so why can't she just make a phone call? Got caught just like that? Wu Yunting, can't you just let her stay at your house? What rights does the Materials Bureau have? Didn't you say it's very hot during the day? Where is the base getting hot? Every day in Jc, the good guys and the bad guys are walking around outside during the day, floating and floating! What the hell!

So kind

Not to mention the plot or writing style, this is an out-and-out bad story just from the perspective of the protagonist. At first, I thought the protagonist was a reborn person who conquered the world with his IQ and strength, but it turns out that the protagonist is a complete egoist, a garbage man who has no moral bottom line and no sense of the overall situation and can't distinguish priorities. The author tried to use some rebellion to slap the protagonist in the face to enhance the sense of satisfaction, but the result was that the protagonist's IQ was worrying and he was not clear-headed.

Now that you have money, can't you buy it yourself? You can grow your own food, buy some daily necessities, and still insist on opening your own factory. The protagonist is too arrogant and takes himself too seriously. Don't you know how to keep quiet? The protagonist is still reborn, but he doesn't have the brain to be reborn.

The writing is okay. Don't write it next time. Everything is terrible from beginning to end. It's too kind. The apocalypse stream doesn't pay attention to the early resource collection. It doesn't feel exciting at all.