Nine Thousand Years of Coaxing and Coaxing, the Mistress Is Kissed and Cried Every Night

The author's writing skills are good, but still very immature. Statements occasionally have logical errors. "Because... So", "fortunately", etc. Are used too casually without paying attention to the internal logic. The plot is actually a very vulgar plot. The backdoor mistress and her sweetheart are separated, and she is semi-forced by her sweetheart, and misunderstood by other women. In fact, these routine plots cannot be said to be unsightly, but the author's problem is that they are too tough, and there is no foreshadowing in many places. The sudden emotional changes make people feel that the heroine's EQ and IQ fluctuate. You make the heroine angry, give her more inner drama, and give her a reason not to care. Otherwise, the heroine would be like a super egotistical and arrogant lady who has a brain but doesn't know how to use it. There is no emotional foreshadowing for Xiao Chongning. It should be love and hate. The entanglement of wanting to be close but wanting to stay away from being alone and beautiful is not clearly written. At the end of reading, I still felt that the heroine only loved herself and liked to be moved by herself. It's so jarring

It's beautiful ~ I still want to watch it after watching it

I can't understand the heroine's train of thought. I haven't heard anything about it after waiting for so long. The heroine seems as if she doesn't have a mouth and is as soft and weak as Bai Lian.

This book is very good, but the chapters are too short. It would be better if it were longer.

The story is quite good and quite logical. The male protagonist is not omnipotent and the female protagonist is also miserable. Fortunately, the misunderstanding was resolved and reconciled. . . The key is double cleansing! ! !

Fortunately, the ending is happy for both of them, and Zhaohua is also happy, no regrets