The Eldest Sister Is as Pale as a Chrysanthemum, and When I Was Reborn, I Went Crazy

1⃣️Aren't the heroine and her eldest sister biological sisters? Why is it said in Chapter 13 that the heroine is a concubine? Then other people who attended the banquet also said that the heroine was a concubine. But isn't the heroine's eldest sister a legitimate child? Why is she a concubine again? 2⃣️In the poem-writing plot later, didn't the heroine disguise her identity and wear a veil? But why did Concubine Zhang directly point out that the heroine was the one who wrote the poem, but Wu Yuanyuan didn't seem to know, and the heroine accepted the award in public, but she still thought that the heroine went back first 3⃣️Didn't ancient people care a lot about the relationship between men and women? Then the male and female protagonists attend the banquet, and the female protagonist After the protagonist said that he loved the male protagonist, after some pulling and pulling, the male protagonist finally directly said that he would marry the female protagonist, and then they made an indirect decision. I feel like the subject matter is good, but the plot is not very smooth.

Writing is not easy to give an average. The subject matter is good, but many storylines have mismatched prefaces and idioms, and idioms are used indiscriminately. For example, in the Poetry Competition at the Flower Banquet in the Palace, the author's mysterious operation is such that the heroine disguises herself with a white jade mask and changes into white clothes to write poems. Wu Yuanyuan is standing next to her. At one moment, she recognizes that the heroine is composing the poem, and at other times, she mutters to herself, thinking that the heroine left without knowing anything. Concubine Zhang pointed out in public that the heroine was the poet and directly rewarded her with items. But others acted like they didn't know who she was. The same goes for leaving the palace. The rewards from the palace were given to the beggars and old people under the imperial wall. Ah~ this... This~ I don't know how much I thought I was sorry for abandoning the imperial concubine's reward, and how to properly attract the imperial concubine's hatred? There is also a heroine giving golden beans to the maid, what does it mean to laugh without any hesitation! There are many places where idioms are abused and the plot is confusing, so I won't go into them one by one.

The context is a mess, it's so messy

Su Yulin is so annoying. It would be better to finish class early.