My Iceberg Female President

The plot needs to be less ink-blank. A fight takes about 7 to 10 chapters. It's too long-winded. It can be detailed but not too long-winded.

It has nothing to do with Shuangwen. Except for the male protagonist, everyone else in the whole story is basically forced to subdue him. The male protagonist is still a coward. In the follow-up, the female protagonist Li Qingyao will probably be forcibly whitewashed and reconciled with the male protagonist.

It's beautiful, but updates are too slow. Will the author be able to finish this book in his lifetime? The ninth of the ten Heavenly Stems

It's just that the update is a bit slow. Please update it quickly.

After reading it all the way, I feel that the theme concept of the author is quite good, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the character design is sharply contrasted. It is a rare and enjoyable article. It is a pity that it cannot be updated on time 3 times a day, otherwise it will definitely be on the must-read list! Come on, author brother! I'm optimistic about you!

The writing is slow and messy.

This book is not just bad. Insignificant people. I ramble on and on and on.

Don't be afraid of being late with a good meal, and don't be afraid of being short with a good book, but this is a bit too short. After waiting for two days, I can only read half a minute, which is too appetizing😇

The update is too slow, which is a bit confusing for readers.

Overall it's good, the plot is exciting, but the updates are too few and too slow.