After the Divorce, I Was Favored by the Empress

Nice!

It's pretty, but it's too short.

If it is finished, I can give it a score of 6.7 Out of ten for the plot, which is above the passing line but below the passing line. But it's not finished, so since the plot has been cut in half, the score should be cut in half, 3.5 Points. If you write a book and no one reads it, I can understand if you don't want to write it and just finish it, but good is good and bad is bad. 3.5 Points is definitely not a loss.

After reading the first ten chapters, I was really bored. It was like watching a group of fools playing. The first chapter was like this. Only one person died. …

Does this plot require you to write about the city?

It's a good time-travel theme, but it's written like an urban novel. It's really rubbish. If you don't have that kind of writing, don't mess around with it.