On the Day We Broke Off the Engagement, My Third Matchmaker, Liupin, Remarried the Emperor's Uncle.

It's beautiful, the writing is great, and the writing is brilliant! I read this and this is the third book! The heroine of this film has a very straightforward and straightforward character! The male protagonist is also a decisive killer! He should also be the kind of maniac who dotes on his wife. If you cause trouble, I will clean it up. If you kill someone, I will hand you the knife! Looking forward to the follow-up plot! 💕ლξ˘❥˘ჴ💕

The story is quite exciting, but the author is very careless in writing, and many of the plots in the story are very confusing. The heroine's mother's dowry girl has been in the marquis's house for more than ten years, and the heroine was not even 20 years old when she rescued her 😂! ! ! ! The first chapter tells how the heroine met her master when she was 10 years old and took her to do business and read the account books. The second chapter tells how old she was when she started to read the account books. The living expenses of more than 300 people in Zhuangzi are 2 taels per person per month to support the ancestors!

The sweet pet is a hammer, and the heroine is neither long-mouthed nor wise. It was quite satisfying to see her go crazy at first, but it took more than 100 chapters to stop chewing. That's fine, wasn't it written as a sweet pet tag? ? ? The heroine started to hide this thing and that thing. It's sweet, can I hit the author on the head with this deceptive stick? ? ! I want to watch Sweet Pet, not the author torturing readers, so I'm convinced.

The plot is exactly the same as the book "After Breaking Up and Marrying My Ex-boyfriend's Brother-in-law". The author You Zhiyu just changed the names. That one is modern and this one is ancient.

I really like this female protagonist. It's so obvious that the male protagonist likes her, but she still pretends to be like that, and they have made it clear that they will be together in the future. She also clearly has a crush on the male protagonist, but she breaks off the relationship with him whenever something happens. There should be a limit to how to indulge in lust. It's really disgusting to keep doing this. Except for the male protagonist, I thought everything else was pretty good. But when it came to the male and female protagonists, I really couldn't follow the plot and was so frustrated that I couldn't keep up.

The plot is lame and the characters are childish

The heroine was very arrogant at the beginning. She wanted to go back and deal with the people who robbed her fiancé. She didn't love her family. As a result, she was slapped on the left and right cheeks. After being slapped, she told the scumbag that if the jade bracelet was taken out earlier, she would consider reconciling with him. Oh my god, she was so stupid that I don't know what to say. Then she climbed into other men's carriages and offered various price cuts. I was really convinced and could still score 9 or more points.

The writing is very poor, I specially logged in to comment. The poor writing does not mean that the plot or some parts are not well written. It means that this article is like a new article written by a new author. It is all in vernacular without any artistic conception. The outline is actually very attractive to me. This kind of heroine is not afraid of anything. I don't care about the trap of family ties even though she knows it is a family trap. I don't want it regardless of my parents' family love. It can obviously be written in a way that makes people feel. I really love this kind of outline, but the level is really too bad. . It's not written at all. Whether it's discomfort, distress, or liking, it's all more vernacular than the vernacular. For example, I think you must be particularly uncomfortable. It's purely modern and modern, with no artistic conception at all. Oh, this book is written in ancient times where there are no rules at all. There are no rules for masters and servants, no rules for parents and children, and no rules for the royal family. Although I don't like it very much, I can accept it. The most important thing is that the writing is not good.

The heroine is too expensive

The recently updated chapters are too verbose. If you are still at this level, you should stop writing novels.