You're Supposed to Be Our Strategist, So Why Are You Teaching the Boys to Be Scumbags?

The sugar content is still enough, but that's it. There are too many plots in the game, and it feels like the relationship between the two is interspersed with other programs while playing games. And there is your pure romance novel. How does it have anything to do with the title of your book? You started out as a military advisor, and then it was a military advisor romance. You had a catchy title, but it was about something else. I felt like I was being deceived.

The writing style is okay, and so is the content. The main drawback is that there are too many water marks, and the author uses a large amount of descriptions. What is the plot of The King and Another Game? How to pass? How to fight? It feels like it has nothing to do with the title, so I can just mention it in one sentence. Why write a whole article? Almost half of a book is written

I think the only shortcoming is L4d2, the king appears too often.

The first half of the novel can be considered to be above the level of nine points. The writing is smooth and it also has a very unique view on love, which directly distinguishes the common problems of popular love. Then, the article started to go downhill. The first problem was that there was nothing to write, and there was little preparation in the early stage. As a result, I repeatedly wrote about two games later, using the game to fill the word count. I could still read it at the beginning and then I skipped it. Secondly, where is the birthday gift for the heroine? , The gift is very strange. The participant or designer of the male protagonist's gift is the male protagonist. When it is the female protagonist's turn, it seems that there are no original gifts to give. Instead, they use other people's gratitude, add their own editing, and edit it into a video. It reads very strange! Third, there are so many things about the university, but the content is too thin. Almost all of them are mindless passers-by being slapped in the face by the male protagonist. It is acceptable once or twice, but it is disgusting to write it repeatedly. Fourth, does it have to be in two dormitories to fall in love? They all had to be paired together to show off the ability of the military advisor, which made me even more speechless. Overall, it is innovative, creative and capable, but it can be said to be a failure later on. In my opinion, it can only be rated 8.0 Points.

There are too many plots in the game and the male protagonist writing a book, it's like a running account

Pure water

So slow

I just feel like I can keep writing. The ending is too fast.

The front is okay, but I don't know what to write in the middle.

Too many games