Harry Potter: Miss Ollivander's Wand Business

This book is the most modified one among the fanfics I have read before (Her Majesty the Queen and the Warriors of the Lion House are not as good as it), Hermione Neville enters Slytherin. The degree of OOC is also the most serious. This book even has the Sorting Hat and Neville being OOC. Draco can be very friendly to Hermione just because of a word from the heroine. The heroine can coax Hermione and Neville into thinking that Slytherin is the best house with just a few words. The conversation is like a human-machine conversation. Famous quote from this book: People in pure-blood families are proud that their children have entered Slytherin. (The Weasleys were eliminated from the pure-blood family) It's simply rebellion against Tiangang

It's your wife's turn Hermione, Wei, and the heroine... All three of them are in Slytherin, and the heroine is particularly awesome, with huge gold fingers. This is not the point. The point is that Ron and Harry are pure villains. Be careful if you are interested in the original novel😃

The subject matter is relatively new, but I feel that Professor McGonagall and Professor Dumbledore are written a bit stupidly. The whole book is good, and the original novel is out of the question!

Author, I am a fan of you because of Draco, but you ended up letting them break up. When I saw this update today, I was confused. Why did two good people break up? Also, it looks good in the front, but in the back it feels like the heroine is becoming more and more ruthless. Just like those capitalists, it is good if it has use value. If there is no use value, it can only be discarded. This is not the article I want to read.

Original book party beware❗️❗️❗️ The subject matter is still very novel, but there are too many magical changes. Hermione was sorted into Slytherin. The Sorting Hat is not a wishing bottle. This is pure discrimination! ⁉️ And how could Malfoy be friends with a Muggle-born wizard? After watching the scene, I feel like the heroine only has money in her eyes🧐 Harry and Ron become villains😳 It doesn't look very good, so I gave it up (/_\)

It's too curious, I don't want to say it anymore, no, author, what do you want to do? Don't bring trouble to our snake farm, okay? Although I am a Snake House Party member. Is this really okay with you? I'm so curious, it's no use hiring any kind of expert at home.

Ugh, it ruined the original work. . . Hermione and Neville are both Slytherins. . What do you want Aunt Luo to think? Moreover, most of the article is in dialogue, the plot progress is too slow, and the most important thing is to ruin the original work! ! !

It's getting worse and worse. It's one of the most magical movies I've ever seen. The heroine feels like she's not a human being. She's an emotionless machine who only knows how to make money. She gets along with everyone just for profit.

Hmm... Although I am a Snake Yard fan, this book's preference for Snake Yard is too... Exaggerated, and Snake Yard just likes purity. I can understand Hermione entering Ravenclaw. The most unacceptable thing is the setting of GGAD. The OOC is too serious. The rational and cold-hearted Principal Dumbledore is too stupid for you to write it. Thank you for not recommending it.

I feel that there are no detailed descriptions. I seriously suspect that this is the author's first time writing. The characters are too polite and the words are too rigid. I suggest that the author write a draft first and add some more vivid language. The only thing I think is good is the title, which is more attractive.