The Story of a Beautiful, Strong and Miserable Female Partner Cultivating Immortality Through the Book

She traveled through modern times and was reborn, and has lived in the world of immortality for two lifetimes, but it seems that she has not shown any strength in her life. She does not see her cleaning the battlefield when she goes to experience and enter the secret realm to kill monsters, or fights with others. She also does not see her put away those monsters. She doesn't know what they do, they just fight.

The first half of the story is pretty good, and you can see what's being written, although time travel and rebirth have woven the world through a sieve. It feels like there are multiple protagonists in one book, but it's still readable. But from the beginning of more than 300 chapters, the writing became a mess. I feel like I'm just trying to make up the word count and have no idea what I'm writing. For example, about three hundred chapters can be written in a secret realm, and there is no harvest in the secret realm. Those people are like walking through a maze in the secret realm... Is there any meaning in writing like this? It is recommended that you just read the ending after reading the 300 chapters. You don't need to read the 600 chapters in the middle.

It's very confusing, the preface doesn't match the postscript

Bad review, I feel like everyone is the protagonist, it's so confusing, I abandoned the article

Messy

Many of them are contradictory and unreasonable. The beads left by the mistress's mother cannot be used by the mistress, but she can use them during the period of Qi training when she was injured (forgetting whether she still has any cultivation level and only recovers and breaks through after recognizing her master). When you are in danger in a secret realm, you don't have to leave in a hurry. You have to clean up normally. But when you dive into the water with two monsters and snakes of the same realm, it's very confusing. I also don't like this setting where I know my family members are in danger but don't tell them clearly. Someone put some soul-destroying fruit in the heroine's room, but her father didn't tell her. The heroine is not mentioned in the crisis of genocide. Even if God doesn't let her talk about it, she can think of other ways. Let your father make some arrangements to increase the strength of everyone in the family as quickly as possible. Didn't it mean that in the previous life, the family united and fought until the last moment?

99.99999% Similar to "The Fairy Queen Who Wears a Book and Cheats Her"

If the heroine has good things, why not put them in the space? Isn't space better than hanging a necklace around your neck?

The writing is too messy, sometimes this, sometimes that, too many protagonists, the whole is a time-travel, time-travel book, time-travel plus rebirth plus time-travel book.

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