It Was Supposed to Be a Fake Marriage, So Why Is the Diva Making It Real?

The plot is okay, but the writing is not that good. There are a lot of typos, and some of the words are a bit inappropriate, which makes it difficult for people to understand at first glance. If you improve it, it will definitely look good and be enjoyable.

Although the subject matter is old-fashioned, the plot is unique Successful characterization The plot develops smoothly Not ridiculous, not painful, not outrageous Readers are very smooth and comfortable Novels have connotations The picture quality is also online The writing is good⊙▽⊙ And then the emotional development line is very endearing

To be honest, it sucks. The emotional scenes are a mess, which is basically a common problem in Internet literature. And this novel is mainly about the emotional line, and the rest is only mentioned briefly. From this point of view, everyone should know that the plot inside is completely gold mining. So we won't comment on this part of the plot. After all, controlling your temper is not easy. Then in the writing, we can clearly see traces of AI in many places. For example, at the beginning, the male protagonist's parents came to the female protagonist's home to visit the two, and then the male protagonist's parents said at the female protagonist's home, "Don't be nervous, just treat it as your own home." This is an obvious AI continuation segment. Of course, if it wasn't written by AI, it would be even worse. Then there are the obvious logical flaws. When the song "Mo" was released, the fans went crazy, and then a bunch of people praised it fiercely. The heroine and major agencies are begging to buy the copyright. Then the second song went directly to "Blue and White Porcelain", and then there was no more, as if it was muddy and fell into the sea, not even a splash. Just send it out and it will be gone. The same goes for "Lanting Preface", there is no splash at all. Just a few words, once the song is released, it is gone. It seems that the song "Mo" is several levels higher than the following two songs. Then the protagonist writes novels, the first one is "Hurry", and the second one is "Fighting the Sky". Of course, it is not "Fighting the Sky" but the author stitched it up himself. The author himself said "I haven't read those books" and then stitched them together. Then later on, when the heroine saw it, she said, "The main character will be broken after a hundred chapters." Why is "Fights Breaking the Sphere" so popular? It was because he didn't really sleep with anyone except Medusa. So it can be distinguished from the harem stallion novel. As long as he really "breaks the melon within a hundred chapters", the book will not even make a splash. The author has not read this book, and then only relies on his own imagination to believe that it is a harem stallion novel, thinking that this book is popular due to stallions, and then "takes the dross and removes the essence" from his novel to create a book "Fighting the Sky" and then forcefully claims that it can be popular. "Fight Breaking the Sphere" became popular because of the lack of cultivation at the beginning and the cancellation of the engagement, so that it first suppressed and then flourished, and it was a reasonable slap in the face to attract other people to watch it, not because of the so-called "harem stallion". I don't even know how to brag about a novel, so why not go to Baidu and check it out? Baidu has a summary of it. Isn't this appropriate for readers to eat?

The plot is very good and the content is full of ups and downs, but there are a lot of typos and the male protagonist is not very smart. As a person who mainly watches male videos, I can use it as a book.

Except for some typos, it does not affect the reading. The subject matter is novel. It is the first time for me as a woman to be so fascinated by a male novel. There is more interaction between the male and female protagonists. I want to watch kiss (bushi)

From the correct values, the author allows me to see the equal status of both men and women in pursuing love. The author makes the plot lines richer and makes the relationship between the two closer and more reasonable. Unlike some novels where you just get married today and you don't like the male protagonist or the female protagonist or they are beautiful tomorrow. I think the author's love values ​​are very correct. Dayong discussed the mutual changes in personality and spiritual world progress between Yun Xiaoran and Shen Jin in a long way. The male protagonist also learned about Shen Jin's family situation. His parents had a conflict at first and wanted to help. Later, he learned that Shen Jin was Shen Mo. He wanted to escape from Bangzi Country with a passport and divorced and began to recognize himself. In order to live an ideal life, he gradually understood Shen Jin and helped ease the relationship between Shen Jin's parents. Shen Jin's changes also made Yun Xiaoran fall in love with such Shen Jin, and let people know all the details of falling in love with people, making people understand the plot more reasonable and more ups and downs.

The subject matter is cliche but the genre is popular. It is acceptable to have an outrageous setting. After all, the novel still has to be read in a fun place. But can you clarify the height settings of the male and female protagonists? It is acceptable that the female protagonist is taller than the male protagonist, but can you not repeatedly jump sideways? If you put on high heels, you will be taller than the male protagonist, and then you will be born taller than the male protagonist.

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The writing was okay at the beginning, but later on the protagonist began to lose character, and the writing was not very good from time to time. The writing style was a bit poor, and the sentences were not very fluent. This is my truth.

I am a musician, and my wife from a flash marriage is a national goddess. If others don't tell you, you still don't know? How could two people in the same industry keep it a secret for so long. Based on her popularity, the software that makes her own music must be recommended. I'm speechless. I've never read such an ugly novel.