After the Rebirth of the Beloved General

The author's writing style is not very bad in Qimiao, but his writing style is a bit immature. There are many logical inconsistencies in this article, which are all supported by the male protagonist. The most disappointing thing is that at the beginning, the female general was stabbed in the back and was killed, and her soul was reborn in another girl. I thought it would be an inspirational revenge article, but in the finale, the heroine was still weak and unable to control herself. She was a weakling with no strength. Her revenge depended entirely on the excellence and strength of her husband. This article can be regarded as creating a affectionate and good male protagonist. He had an unwavering love for the female protagonist in his previous life. In this life, he immediately discovered through understanding the heroine that the heroine was the soul of his sweetheart who was resurrected from the dead. He helped the heroine's family clear their grievances step by step. Some of the series of descriptions of the male protagonist are remarkable. The heroine is written rather stupidly, conceited and self-righteous. I think the image of the heroine is not well created after the soul is transferred to another person. Even if the body changes, the spirit and temperament cannot be changed. A female general who is decisive in killing and has a courageous character cannot really turn into a weak and weak woman even if her soul is penetrated. The article always writes that although the heroine is not sick, her body is a waste, she can't walk well and she falls down. She cries every day and pretends to be weak. Especially in the scene where she meets the fiancé who killed her for the first time after her rebirth, the writing is too failed. The overall description of the heroine is very poor, and there is no trace of the female general at all, which is very useless. The reason why the male protagonist can recognize the female protagonist is because of the far-fetched way of guessing that the female protagonist called him the same thing as she had said to him before. I originally wanted to see the female general kill everyone after being reborn, but in her previous life, the heroine knew nothing about court battles. She was reckless and blinded by love. These three words "rivals" are the theme. The author has created a pair of sworn enemies. To what extent are they rivals? The article said that if the other party dies, they can celebrate, but there is no description of the hatred between the two. Instead, there are many stories about the two of them cherishing each other, encouraging and helping each other. But the relatives and friends around them all think that they are sworn enemies, rather than happy enemies. They repeatedly write that the heroine thinks that the hero is a sworn enemy, and hate and hate the hero, but they do not write any factual basis. How do you let the readers understand the heroine's IQ? Later, I wrote it, that is, the male protagonist deliberately made the little girl angry with these trivial things, so he can be called a mortal enemy? Maybe it was just to be able to write more than a hundred chapters where the female protagonist doesn't trust the male protagonist and is suspicious of the male protagonist, so as to increase the sense of tension between the two. The ending is not perfect, the punishment for the villain is too light, the ex-fiancé refuses to repent before being exiled, and wants to cause trouble for them, and the heroine is too incompetent throughout the story, with no shining points.

It's a very good book. The male and female protagonists are very funny and the plot is also very exciting. I look forward to the two of them working together.