I'm in Tiga, and I Get Zero's Glasses as a Reward from the Start

Originally the writing was pretty good, but you gave me an ending like this, a dream, but there are some places where the writing is a little bit poisonous. Is the main character the real body or the human body? I always get slapped and knocked down with a stick. If it's the body, if you write it like this, it's a bit poisonous. But if it's the human body, just think I didn't say it. The system has appeared a few times in the front, but it's useless in the back, and I won't give the system space. This book is three and a half stars.

The writing is too stiff. Common words (sarcastic, sudden, slow)

Why is the back system missing?