The Old Ancestress Is Here, Bringing Her Pocket Dimension Along

The subject matter is not bad, but the time traveler it is written about has no sense of superiority at all. He knows that his home is being ransacked and he has not made plans early, so he should take it in. He is not decisive enough to kill and there should not be too many surprising words! Oops, writing is not easy. I just have some suggestions.

The characters are not full of characters. Apart from saying that he is an agent, nothing else shows the keen insight of the agent, including other professional qualities. None of the children of the generals in the family are well-educated, and they are more like raised by civil servants. If it sounds good, it is stupid if it sounds bad. The mutation in the family has not changed the character of the children and adults. The whole family is like invisible people, and they are pulled out when there is a plot. Without the plot, these people are not as many as White Tiger.

It's so verbose and I'm tired of listening to it.

I've been following it for a month, it's worth watching!

It's a pity to throw it away, but it's tasteless to eat.

The old lady at the beginning had little space✍👀, which was a bit frustrating✍👀, but the family united and worked hard to protect the family and the country👍. In the end, she killed the traitor and the ignorant king🗡, and it was a complete success✨, and the whole family ended up living a happy and peaceful life✍👀💖💖

After reading Chapter 87, I decided to abandon the article. The heroine's space is only as big as a basketball court, but she actually moved into several hundred acres of land during her exile. Dozens of officials and bandits were also put in to farm the land. There is also a problem with the heroine's character, she has no charisma. I am just a time traveler who feels good about myself along the way. There is no interactive plot, and the overall look is like an indoor sitcom, and there is only one plot, which is to collect and collect.

Quite fresh! When you travel through time and become a widowed old man, the love line is no longer needed! The royal family is unkind, I will destroy your whole family! There are still some issues with the details, such as: ① After the space is integrated with the fields, it will definitely be more than the size of the basketball court at the beginning. How will those labor reformers deal with it later? How to deal with the wealth collected? ② I don't know if the death of the heroine was deliberately deceived. It was too careless. After all, she is the soul of the whole story. Doesn't she deserve a funeral? ③The treasures in the previous dynasty were not explained later. They seemed to be made just for a few chapters.

At once. . . Outrageous. ➕Speechless

Boring