The Rise of the Cao Immortal Clan

It seemed like it started out okay, but it turned out that it was all about the protagonist and the women. It was a family story. You might as well have written about marrying a wife. It was all about the protagonist being coquettish and the women around him being coquettish.

The story is written very delicately and excitingly. I will keep up with the updates after collecting them. I look forward to more exciting stories in the future. I'm optimistic about you, fellow Taoist! Come on

It's good-looking, but it's too little. It's not enough to watch.

I saw that it was the theme of the cultivation family that attracted me. The characters and storyline are rich. An upgrade routine from Qi training to foundation building. If you want to be the protagonist, you must be both physical and spiritual. All it takes is Xiuxian Baiyi to show up. Chapter 300, the protagonist appeared on the fifth level of Qi training, broke through two levels in the first 20 chapters, and broke through two levels in the last two chapters. Now he has nine levels of Qi training. The other chapters are describing the story and time. The chapter arrangement is unreasonable. Although the source of resources for cultivating immortals is explained is important, the protagonist does not He cultivates immortality but does not practice martial arts. Writing about him having sex at work all day long is off topic. The descriptions of various characters are too detailed. (It is enough to write about the important supporting characters. I wish I could give him a whole chapter for every character who appears. Isn't it a bit too much to write a chapter for each of the slaves, cannon fodder and maids?)

Speechless, the author is not suitable for writing fairy tales, so he should write urban novels! The whole film is full of joy between men and women, and I can't see any trace of cultivating immortality. I came to the family to cultivate immortality, purely to see the path to immortality, not to see men and women. To see this, you might as well read urban literature! The author is completely on the wrong track!

The whole story is about male love and female love, but it's all about how the woman is seduced, the protagonist gets hard but holds back, it's considered a eunuch novel. The family has not developed, and the protagonist has not done anything to save the family from crisis. In more than two hundred chapters, he is still practicing at the seventh level of Qi. In the end, the ancestral land is lost, and the protagonist will only love and love there. What kind of family culture is this?

Isn't this a little Huang Wen? He can dig wherever he goes.

Did the author write the novel about immortality as a romance novel? Everywhere you meet women. Go crazy.

The story about a family cultivating immortality results in a very low trace of the family, and then they forcefully suppress the protagonist's realm. Others can support a family with the resources to build a foundation, but it is difficult for the protagonist to build a foundation alone. Will he be happy if the whole world has to support the protagonist and a writer?

The beginning was okay, but the more I read about the dog market, I was speechless 😅. I had given it good reviews before, but when I saw the dowries from my wives, I felt like I had been poisoned.