Who Says He Has No Talent for Cultivation?

It's just a matter of family, confiscating the money, it's not a scammer, it's not a way to earn points. The long-lost traditional genius stream cultivates immortality, first martial arts and then immortality (Pig's Foot has not yet begun to cultivate immortality), there is no system, the aborigines are decisive in killing. There are also several female characters during the period, except for a little princess, who are either villains or supporting characters. There is no ambiguity, and unlike most novels nowadays, the female characters are described in various brushstrokes as soon as they appear, hoping to make readers react after reading it. There are also shortcomings, that is, there are too many side plots, and some of them are beginning to converge. The main plot is advancing very slowly. I have not reached 1 million words to achieve immortality. I am afraid I have to write 3 to 4 million words.

Nice

It's a fantasy sketch. Before it's over, all kinds of women start to circle around the protagonist. The women want to kill him. They can't be cruel. They kill all the men, and the women are soft-hearted. Holy Mother, licking the dog.

The writing is pretty good, but even up to chapter 500 it hasn't solved a single theme. This whole thing makes other people feel very uncomfortable.

This book is for primary school students!

Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was a fairy tale, but why did the author write a martial arts novel? ! !

Affect IQ

I saw three hundred palms, which is generally fine. It's just a bone, okay? Don't write it until the finale. It doesn't matter if you cultivate or not. Don't hold it off, it's initially refreshing, but over time it becomes toxic.

The language is refined and the words are gorgeous. But the plot is relatively flat, and the mix of cultivating immortals and practicing martial arts is unclear.

Logic confusion