After the Legitimate Daughter Is Reborn, the Ascetic Prince Will Not Marry Her Unless She Is

Overall, it's pretty good, but there are some places in the text that aren't explained clearly. For example, when the fourth prince forces the palace, the male protagonist is suddenly stabbed, which is a bit abrupt. Also, the heroine in the article is too holy, too kind, not strategic enough, and has average abilities. She has no decisiveness and decisiveness. She is almost killed by her friends, but she forgives her. The hero occasionally shows a little murderous spirit, but the heroine feels that she is too much. To be honest, I really don't like this heroine. The hero is slightly stronger than the heroine. In my eyes, the male and female protagonists in the novel "Rebirth" should be decisive in killing, smart and sagacious, not blind to the three steps at a time, not holy, not overflowing with compassion, I will not offend others unless they offend me, and I will punish them if they offend me. Also, I hope that the male and female protagonists in the past and present lives are both pure, and there is no white lotus to interfere with the relationship between the male and female protagonists. That is to say, I like cool stories, and the whole story is a scumbag.

It's okay. I read the comments and said that this is the author's first book. Emmmm. When I read it, I just felt that the description was awkward. Many of the words were not rigorous, and some of the sentences were not fluent. In short, there are quite a lot of flaws. Come on, author. I look forward to your new work.

As a newbie, the writing is pretty good! Come on 💪

It's pretty good for a newbie to write like this

Things that come and go are of no consequence. I don't even know what I want to express

Nice

The plot is exciting and the writing is brilliant. It's worth watching!