Self-Disciplined, I Am Invincible

Systematic, imaginative, and funny, the writing style of the novel tends to be humorous in the early stage, and gradually becomes serious in the later stage, and the plot is compact and not procrastinating‌. The mix of modern elements and immortal cultivation elements is not natural enough, the cultivation system is confusing, and the protagonist's intellectual performance is disappointing. The protagonist's EQ and IQ performance are not consistent, and the updates are unstable and interrupted.

In terms of look and feel, it's pretty good. It's quite comfortable to watch. Except for the slow pace and low rewards from the system, the plot content can be said to be relatively perfect, and there are no typos. It's still very comfortable to watch. Come on, author, keep up the hard work😎😎😎

How to say it? The plot of this novel is compact and imaginative. The improvement of cultivation is the absolute main line, and the emotional line is only an auxiliary. Some parts have successfully caught the readers' attention. It is considered a masterpiece! But as the name of the protagonist "Li Dan" shows, many of the ideas in the novel are indeed "nonsense". First of all, the author has no concept of numbers and often uses millions as the unit. For example, hundreds of thousands of people gather at an auction, and an "electric beast space" can accommodate 100,000 people...; It feels like eating is superfluous! The third point is that the early "Jiangshan Sheji Map" could contain the entire sect and carry it with him. Later, it was handed over to the senior brother. Later, the senior brother stayed in the sect for a long time, which caused unexplainable logical errors; fourth point, the "Mosaic Old Man" was an invincible existence in the early stage, creating the place of exile and Three Thousand Small Worlds, but it was later revealed that he was only in the Immortal Lotus Realm, but when the protagonist Li Dan reached and surpassed multiple realms to become the Godhead Realm, what could he do? He could only fight and kill; the fifth point is "System", it is an awesome existence that transcends everything, and any will of heaven is not worth mentioning in front of it. It can cultivate itself. Reconciling "anti-virus" can create "spirits" that are not afraid of death. What opportunities are there for systematic existence? Finally, let's talk about the plot arrangement. The protagonist goes from the small world to the super world. There is an emotional line that attracts readers, which is the dark temple and the goddess. In the end, all the puzzles are solved and the protagonist's four wives are revealed. Now, in order to make the protagonist a savior, the author even changed his "one step at a time" style of cultivation and directly ascended from the Great Desolate Realm to the Transcendence Realm. Everything showed that the novel should end, but the author just wanted to continue the story. I guessed that the author had really "exhausted his talent", and it turned out to be "unfinished" at this point! No more talking, let's disperse!

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The combat power is getting more and more broken, and only then can I see about 400 chapters. The protagonist's cheating can't be so outrageous. After about 400 chapters, it's easy to forget about the ancient prince Jinggu King, all kinds of leaps and bounds, and there are more than 2,000 chapters after the key. I really can't imagine how outrageous the plot will be.

I originally wanted to give it a good answer, but halfway through I realized that the subplot was not written well, and it was a bit confusing. If you can't grasp it, don't write it in a big way. In addition, there are still some details in the setting that have not been handled well.

A lot. The first is the writing style, and the second is that as the protagonist's level rises, there are passers-by and villagers everywhere who have no background or description, and they all have the same strength as the protagonist. It's really annoying.

No typos, this rating is really low.

The plot is exciting. The further you go, the more you look forward to it. The author will update soon😭

11:55 The author is just not good at it. He said earlier that he hates people who kill others indiscriminately, but later on he writes that the protagonist kills many people and just kills them for a reason. What's the difference between killing people he hates? Also, this author doesn't know how the flow of time is relative. Shouldn't your rhubarb be accelerating time or decelerating it? I suspect that this author doesn't even know what heaven is. He hasn't heard of it for a year, but his level is limited and he can't understand it. The worst thing about it is that some people are two or three higher realms than you. No matter what it is, the author in his works absorbs it and rises to a small realm. A good guy is like giving his life to get an elixir for mortals to eat, and he is promoted to foundation building (metaphor)