The Eldest Son's Beloved Maid

Read almost 200 chapters It can be said that this male protagonist is the most clear-headed male protagonist I have ever seen. He plans for the female protagonist wholeheartedly. Although he doesn't know where her feelings came from, he feels that they came very quickly. Such a male protagonist is really quite likable. But I actually don't like this heroine very much. I just don't know whether it's the author's description or some of her personal thoughts. Some of the descriptions feel like green tea and white lotus flowers, or soft and delicate descriptions. But the problem is not big, maybe it's just a different personal perception. Finally, what I hate most about this article is that the male protagonist and his family can deliberately raise the second wife for power or to confuse the emperor. Although the second wife is said to be a trade-off, only the second brother knows that his wife and children have no idea at all, which is embarrassing. , Your second wife's child and the second wife's grandmother both have problems, but if I didn't hide it from them, I felt like I was looking at a fool. Moreover, the male protagonist told his father that he had to give the second wife's children homework, or talk about how to be a good person, and then the second wife stopped him, so why didn't he tell his father at that time? If this bad situation is allowed to develop and the child of the second wife goes astray, or at the first sign of it, why not stop it immediately? But to collect evidence, how about that? It also feels quite cold.

Miscalculation, I didn't finish writing it.

It was pretty good in the beginning, but the image of the eldest princess was inconsistently created, and what the hell was the point of recreating the story of the male naval engineer who discovered the iron mine and returned to Beijing... It felt like there was a missing chapter. Too sloppy

The plot set up to advance the plot is so deliberate.

There is something wrong with the writing. The character of the queen is not good. I don't know how to be a queen of a country. The heroine's servant suddenly became the hero's brother through thick and thin. I don't know what I am writing.

Aren't the male and female protagonists sent to rebuild the Biennan Navy? Why did he automatically return to Beijing after discovering the iron mine and nothing happened?

At first I felt that the plot was not sluggish, but later on it became more and more messy. The first part got better, and the later part was the same as before. I even forgot how I wrote it before. . . . .

Not bad