Eyes from the Sky: I'm Crazy About Picking up Leaks

Well written 👍🏾

Just look

It's a good subject matter, but it's a pity that the author failed to write it. If you don't have the ability, don't waste this resource.

A good subject matter is wasted, and later readers can read it without thinking. (Plan a minefield) The main character doesn't have much strength, but his tone is quite high-pitched. I don't know how to show off his vulgarity. Everyone shouts that I am the biggest, as the saying goes, a dog that bites does not bark.

I don't know where the 9.3 Points come from? What are you writing about, renting a house, and what other soft antique threads are there? What did you write? Is it that easy to get antique thread? Do you think it's reasonable? I don't want to make enemies for myself, just kill the protagonist as soon as possible

I guess the author doesn't even know what the hell he's writing about.

I can write

Bring your own gas mask

Procrastinating, boring, almost no ability, still pretending, asking people for everything, relying on people, a waste

The novel is okay