The Villain's Simp Finally Quit, and All the Heroines Lost It

The progress of the plot is very slow, with a lot of nonsense narrations. After listening to chapters 73-74, Yun Ruoxi basically said every sentence (man, are you trying to make up the word count?), But I still didn't insist on listening. The dialogue was not bad, but it was just scratchy. At the beginning, when Yun was not as powerful as Yun, he was a little more cowardly, but later he became powerful and was not afraid of the male protagonist. He was still thinking about breaking off the engagement, so why can't he be more decisive? If you like strong marriages but don't like having too many spare wheels, it will be over in 201. You wrote a cloud and wrote 74 but you still haven't come up with a reason. It's really fun to write. Is there a fixed word count salary? But that's all we heard

This book is also very interesting, because it is considered a good one among many online articles. The villain and protagonist are reincarnated. Finally, this time, I am the protagonist. It is a good idea. What is very sudden is: The author is so awesome, the ending is too hasty! There are many doubtful points that have not been solved yet, such as the Saintess of Southern Xinjiang, the Tiandao Alliance, and the Zhao family, etc., And a series of doubtful points have not been solved yet, so they just ended hastily, which is very bad in appearance.

In order to advance the plot, conflicts are deliberately created. The protagonist is the author. Even if he is dressed as a villain, does he have to act according to the villain's behavior? Doesn't he have his own normal worldview and values? Why do you have to follow the plot, what do you want to do, what are you willing to do, it feels uncomfortable in terms of action and thinking?

There is a lot of nonsense and the characters are very cute.

The foreshadowing of the plot is pretty good, and I feel like it will become more popular as it continues to be written, but it's a pity that it ended early.

There are endless voices from the heart, and everything you say with your mouth must be added with a heartfelt voice. No one has a brain.

The ending ends hastily! Can't stand it

Really sucks

Feels like a fast food book

Not bad