After the High Priest Was Reborn as a Real Daughter, the Shark Went Crazy

The heroine is said to be strong. Every time she encounters a person who is short-sighted and insults her with malice, the heroine has to remain silent and let the hero deal with it. Call it that she is not strong. She can easily deal with all kinds of demons and monsters. In short, it seems that she is not good enough, especially when she is scolded for nothing. The chapter is very long. Even if the heroine does not take these people seriously, not everyone can humiliate you. It is really tiring to watch.

It's quite interesting. It's better than other fantasy-themed writing. It kept me entertained while watching it. It's very good. Me who is equal:? ? ? Gone? ? ? Hahahahaha, seriously speaking ——(pretend there is a dividing line)—— The above words are for the readers, and the following words are for the author: Let's talk about the shortcomings first. I was a bit confused in reading, because to be honest, the author was too wordy in some places. For example, during the recognition banquet, in order to show the swordsmanship between several people, the positions of the people present changed again and again in just a few sentences. However, each change was too long, including facial expressions and psychological descriptions, and these changes happened in an instant. It only took two groups of people to say a few words, and it was written in long paragraphs. There is a bit of Che Lulu talk, and the focus of this scene is actually language. Readers will subconsciously want to know what the next sentence says, and if the spaced text is too long, they will want to skip it. Especially after this happens many times, they may still read what is written the first two times. Later, they find that most of Che Lulu's words are subconsciously skipped, and read what they say, and doing so does not affect the perception of the plot. I can understand that the author wants to reflect the impact of the protagonist's simple language on the onlookers at the banquet. Appropriate description is reasonable and can make the scene more vivid. However, this kind of description should not be too much, otherwise it will cause the situation that I mentioned above and make people feel like skipping it. So I suggest that the author can improve in this aspect. I am quite optimistic about this article. It is much better than the poor-quality writers who have written about live broadcasts, fortune-telling, and so on before (those who can feel the quality of writing after reading dozens of chapters are on par with those who write about live-streaming love stories. However, with the development of entertainment industry, there are actually many good writers, and there are not many metaphysics subjects) Judging from the overall framework of the article, this is just the tip of the iceberg. I can feel that the volume of this story is quite large. I like the author's writing style very much. I hope you will stick to it and don't end it. I am very optimistic about you 😉 btw The author's characterization is also good. The heroine has a very cold image, and her kindness is not overflowing. She is indifferent to others, has her own principles and arrogance. The heroine's character is also very tenable, including the aunt next to the heroine and the young lady who admired her at the banquet. The image of women is no longer thin and brainless. They have their own ideas and ambitions. I like it very much. I hope the author can also be more versatile in the creation of villains. I look forward to seeing more interesting villains.

The mountains of the Feng family, the land of the Feng family, the child bride of Feng Shen...

How did her biological mother treat her? Every time she was controlled by the original owner's emotions, didn't she say that she would rather find a way on her own than be controlled? Shouldn't the powerful priest always find his own way to solve the problem as mentioned before, or should he be disgusted by his biological mother again and again? Why does the high priest have to go to school in this situation? Do you want to know about tutoring? Or should the male protagonist go to college when his life hangs by a thread? ? ? ? Thank you very much. . . . .

Please ask the author not to include real-life celebrities in the novel next time. Since it is a novel, why can't it be a fictional person?

The first part is okay, but the second part feels like a mess, the writing is messy, and the ending is too sudden.

The author's writing is very good and the plot is very novel! It's just that the updates are too slow! Lots of updates!

It makes me want to vomit blood, so there is no need to be reborn just to fall in love. There are not many stories.

It's so boring. I can't watch the front anymore.

The author's writing style is mediocre, and the storyline is not interesting. He always mentions what happened before the sacrifice. The heroine's character is not distinct and three-dimensional enough.