You Promised to Control the Beast and Become a God, but You Punched the Star?

Just a few words The plot in the first part of the book is compact and immersive, and it reads very smoothly. It is interrupted by a small bridge and a long stream of water flows into the wooden third part. The short plot at the end slowly begins to add foreshadowing, and the pace slows down a bit, but it makes people more willing to continue reading. It feels like watching it forever and not sleeping. When it comes to this, I have to talk about my personal feelings. If I keep writing at this pace, it will be an excellent work. In other words, if I keep the rhythm of the previous section, the number of words may not be that many, but it is so satisfying and thorough that I think it can be regarded as a masterpiece! Although I have said so much, this book is worth reading carefully! Put in a mouthful of radish and green vegetables and let everyone have their own favorites! I just saw chapter 58 when I was talking about it.

It's a good beast-control story, and the plot is pretty good too.

Cute new book, please cover me😘😘😘😘😘😘

Stop writing it. The male protagonist is like an incompetent loser. He has a system and is threatened by women and enemies every day. The author should just cut him off.

The writing of the cool article is the same as the main article of abuse. You dare not avenge, you have the strength and cheats. People step on your head from time to time. You can still pretend to be cool without changing your expression. You are submissive in doing things. You are not like a man. Forget it. Is this a lousy plot still 9.5? At most 5 points is too high

It looks good, but there are no details when driving🌚🌚

The subject matter is a good one, but the writing is too poor and there are too many poisonous points. The protagonist's IQ is touching, and the supporting characters are all stupid...

Forcibly creating a lot of so-called troubles, embarrassing to the point of picking my feet

It's too cliche, and the plug-ins feel useless. I say I'm just trying to be stubborn, but the result is that the writing is completely different, forcing conflicts, creating a lot of poison, and wasting time.

It's really disgusting!